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Name: Valorallen Vitellia Age: 78 Gender: Male Race: Human Employment Information: Captain, Paygrade 13, Level 10 Is there anything that you are legally obligated to reveal, or anything that you wish to notify the crew about: No Signature: Valorallen Vitellia

Wait, what? I never heard once that anyone in the Andromeda Galaxy was even a thing. Also, no, there really is no reason. I feel like Nanotrasen wouldn't do this.

I feel that Internal Affairs SHOULD have access to all of the records console. Especially with their new OOC trust that has been given to them with the Head whitelist. ICly, it also makes sense as the IAA are one of the most trusted personnel aboard the station. They keep Central Command updated on the happenings of the station and if Central needs something from them if there is an investigation, they can contact the IAA to assist. I am sure there are more reasons but, they should have access to all the records, just what I am thinking. About the Medical records, does the Head of Personnel really need to have access to those, because, as far as I know, they do. Along with the Head of Security I believe. Internal Affairs could be added to the list of access with really no issue as I would trust them more than the Head of Personnel since they are Loyalty Implanted.

Elyra News Network “For Greatness, We Strive” Unathi Push Into Serene Riyadh 2.20.2458 Unathi Push Into Serene Riyadh Elyran forces based around the Serene Riyadh system met their share of conflict this morning. At around 9:30 AM, Galactic Standard Time, Unathi forces ambushed smaller vessels within the Serene Riyadh system. Luckily, an emergency message from the Elyran vessels were picked up by Edrine Command and by Commander Al-Rahiya who dispatched a large group of ships that are part of the Elyran Defense Fleet, the party that was first thought to be Unathi raiders that have been experienced by Edrine before are now thought to have been members of the Izweski Hegemony, these are still not confirmed but Serene Riyadh is now under a state of emergency until all outside threats are cleared. The main bulk of the Unathi ships have already been dealt with, with minor casualties on the Elyran side. Governor Limdina released a report containing the exact outcomes of the battle. He has said that there are still possible raiding ships within the system and that civilians are advised to stay away from the outer parts of the system.

This should definitely be a thing. While roman numerals are fancy and all, I would like to have numbers for names. An IPC that I have seems almost too special without the numbers. I feel like the numbers would make them feel more of a factory model.

Alright so, I just started to notice you within the past couple days in OOC. I don't believe that I have seen your characters ingame though. Judging from this application and how it is well written, I would feel fine with giving you this whitelist. Your OOC attitude and how you come across on forum posts impresses me and I feel like you are mature enough to be in the Head of Staff role. I would say a +1.

((Closing due to administration intervention with one of the players.))

I have seen many of Shadow's characters. Most of them have been pretty good and I don't usually worry when I see them on the manifest. Don't really see a reason why they should get he whitelist. +1

Elyra News Network “For Greatness, We Strive” Trade Fleet Attacked? 2.18.2458 Trade Fleet Attacked? Earlier this year, the largest fleet of trading vessels was launched from the New Ankara system. This fleet was on it’s way back to Persepolis when contact was lost with them. The vessels were last spotted outside of the Serene Riyadh system where there was a short burst of an emergency message that was received by Edrine Command. Currently, EDVs have been sent out to secure the area of where the ships were last spotted. Commander Al-Rahiya, Commander of the EDV Division located in Serene Riyadh was quoted saying this, “While we are not sure what exactly happened to the Elyran traders that were outside our system. We have a few suspects, one of those being the Unathi raider group called, ‘Shakd Loroask’. They have been reported in the area where the vessels were last seen. We will continue our investigation of what has happened during this unfortunate event.” There were also a few other announcements from political figures located on Edrine requesting any information on what happened to the trading vessels be brought to them immediately. If you have any information, this number has been provided Below is the contact information that can be used to give any tips on what happened.

Meta, I will just put this out there. I, and I am sure many others have offered to help create a better background for a character. Some even offered to help with your previous character. You need to take a step back and look to see the type of character you made. It is completely unrealistic as Jackboot said. I am serious about this, if you are willing to fix what was wrong, I will work with you on getting a better character that isn't some sort of super being. It also isn't just me that could help creating a character with a normal backstory and some basic set of records. I know for a fact that there are others willing to help with this. I have seen them offer publicly over the forum posts where you were asking for opinions on Seon. This will not keep going on in an endless cycle. I am putting that out there now.

Haha, I found an issue with yours. Insta-denied bro. But to be serious, wow... This is by far just the most work I have ever seen be put into an application before. Based on the backstory of your character alone, I would say this could be accepted right away. You clearly understand the Unathi lore and are able to create very... VERY extensive stories with the lore you are given. I have roleplayed with a few of your characters, they have all been pretty good experiences. Nothing too bad coming from it. I would be greatly disappointed if you didn't get the whitelists as you put so much effort into it. Definite +1

The issue is, you cannot have a semi-normal character. They all have to be special in their own way. The NSS Aurora (Exodus) is just a station of regular people. No princes of some magical bluespace kingdom that is somehow unknown to Nanotrasen but they still hire them. Another, thing. Isn't there a rule where you cannot play anyone of importance, (Kings, Princes, Nanotrasen Board)? Pretty sure that is something you cannot do.

To be honest right now, that was probably the most feedback I have gotten on a whitelist application in a while xD Thanks for the serious feedback though.

Of the characters I have met of yours, all of them have been very well roleplayed, your application seems fine to me, I think you deserve the Unathi Whitelist. +1 from me.

Something else also just came to mind, CCIA Officials are the ones who lorewise wrote and approved the records that your characters have. It wouldn't make sense that they wouldn't be able to add things to them, like suspensions or injunctions. Maybe a special area on records? Not sure where it would be put if someone actually has filled records.

I feel that something like this would most definitely help with ongoing punishments on their records. Probably better than having people head to the forums every time.

It normally does because a lot of people don't come and look at the whitelist area unless they have a reason or are linked. At least from what I noticed.

Giving this a little bump, think it was forgotten about. Not sure if you are advertising it in OOC but that may help. Would like to see you try out this Head of Staff position.

Well, it is not that you have a different set of priorities it is that. These races, (Not so much IPC in my opinion) are very diverse culture-wise. It is just how things have been on Aurora, and honestly how a lot of whitelist systems are for HRP server in SS13. People want to know that the person they are giving a whitelist to can roleplay accordingly. Sure, you can write an application. Many people have done that and ended up chucklefucking with the new species because they weren't actually understanding how things went or felt special I guess. I would be more than happy to give you a +1 on the app if I see you ingame and like your roleplay. These are merely suggestions to get others who are not constantly stalking the forums to give feedback to you. If you don't want to do those things, you are more than welcome not to but there is a high chance that people will simply never see the post to give feedback to. Good luck though.