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That dynasty thing is a good idea. I think I am going to have it changed to that. With the blandness thing, I was hoping someone would either be able to help with that or, I could rewrite it to be more of a story type thing and less pure facts. Not really sure how I would go about making it more interesting. Go more indepth about its history and not like you are reading it from a textbook?

I did it, I finally broke Bokaza But in all seriousness, if you think I should, I could change their government type. Wasn't completely sure on the idea.

Yeah, I actually stopped even having the volume on more recently. I have been having really weird headaches from what I can only assume the ambient sound. It is always weird when I unplug my headphones and realize how weird it sounds. It being a little quieter or something would be nice.

Type Faction Founding/Settlement Date: 2362 Region of Space: Middle to Frontier colonies Controlled by: The Decebal Conglomerate Other Snapshot information: - Frontier Nation - Human - Eastern European culture - Dynasty based Matriarchy (Medium power, has to uphold citizen rights.) - Rising relations with Nanotrasen Long Description: I made this faction mainly because I felt that there really wasn't enough information on the frontier factions and I wanted to breathe some life into the frontier. I want to note, that this is the first time that I have ever written something like this. I am willing to let this be changed in anyway if you bring it up here. Also, please point out anything that you find odd in this. Like I said, first time doing something like this. I also have yet to decide on a name for any of the members of the Government. This is just an outline, I would like to make this seem more real rather than something that you would read in a textbook. One final thing, their history is able to be changed completely. Just an idea that I thought up.

Yes, he also job hops a lot from what I have seen. Along with acting in ways that would not keep a person like him hired for a very long period of time. I would suggest trying to develop one character to be not very extreme and play them quite a bit so people can experience good roleplay coming from you. My first character was pretty insane so I canned them and created a new character who was developed. Just a suggestion that may help with getting this application accepted. Also, creating a character who is trained in specific things and sticking to those things help quite a bit in my opinion.

I am giving this application a -1 due to the state of your application and the personalities that I have experienced coming from your characters. One the application is fixed, I may consider changing my vote.

I feel honored that I am the topic of 50% of your posts

Ehh, you deserved it

I do not support this application whatsoever. I have had very bad experiences with Sunshine Hall. One of those was earlier where she was demoted for completely disregarding the CMO's orders. After the demotion and an explanation of the demotion she started saying, "I hate my life" "I want to die" "All my money goes to the person who lets me die" She then started punching herself to death only stopping after Security stunned her. They would not be at all a good candidate for any whitelist at this time. -1 from me.

BYOND Key: YouJustGotOwened Character Names: Valorallen Vitellia - Aefia Vitellia - Ri'Kistae Sahir - Zavi Sahir - Ciri Sahir - Ilena Romanescu - Eurail Qu-Tup - Shadow Of The Stars - One Who Walks With Rain Species you are applying to play: IPC What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: I like the idea of playing as a synthetic that isn’t bound to the laws like a borg or AI is. It seems like a cool race to have a character that develops over time and sort of emulates the personalities of the people that it interacts with. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: It is a machine, it doesn’t feel emotions in the way that humans do as it doesn’t really have emotions at all. There are some that don’t even bother with trying to emulate emotions and even if they do, there are usually quirks in their personalities. It really depends on what kind of IPC that a person wants to create. If they make an IPC fresh off the assembly lines it may just have a barebone personality. Character Name: VitTech Unit-592 Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs VitTech Unit-5192, Vit for short was manufactured by the company VitTech that is based in the frontier systems. It was created to be part of the now failed attempts of creating an industry Unbound Synthetics business but eventually the branch of the corporation that created the units lost their fundings and sold the units to many other companies for extra cash. Vit along with 49 other units of the same design were sold to Nanotrasen back in 2456 and the units were sent to the Tau Ceti system to be distributed across the company. 592 was placed aboard the NMSS Odin and passed Nanotrasen safety tests. The initial tests revealed that 592 would benefit Nanotrasen if it was placed upon the NSS Aurora to assist with the happenings of the station. It and along with it’s sibling units were created in a way that tried to slightly emulate the emotions of the crew to make them bearable to work with. The emotions emulator is very barebones causing for many quirks with their personalities. What do you like about this character? I like that Vit is an IPC that was created along with many other units with the exact same programming as many other units which makes it not very unique. I like that it is able to develop it’s own personality and it isn’t too extreme of a character. How would you rate your role-playing ability? 7 or 8/10 there are some things that I could improve on. Notes: This was sort of an out of the blue application, I have been reading over the lore on IPCs and decided it was time that I made an application to play as one. I am not too familiar with their lore so if you find anything that doesn’t sound right, let me know.

Most of the people involved in the Incident decided to NOT get involved. Closed due to inaction.

I thought it was "ootini"

If you want words to stand out more, you can make single words red or blue. That is really the most I have seen from them.

Just want to put this out here. Not sure if he is still active. Haven't seen his character since either the 6th or the 7th.

I guess for something like that, if you are using the format that Sierra made for the server, you could put something like knowledge in atmospherics. If most of your accomplishes were done on the Aurora I guess it would be something in your records. A simple, "Employed as Station Engineer, Chief Engineer and Atmospheric Technician" added to your records, should be enough where you wouldn't get demoted again like that. Again, I am assuming you are using this link for your records. I am under the impression that this topic is for more crazy things like this, Or something like copying paperwork that is given to you ingame over to your records. That doesn't make any sense lorewise as a Duty Officer is the person who creates your records. Basically why you need to go through them if you want an official paperwork added to your records.

You cannot set your own applications as procesing. People who approve or deny applications do that. Just letting you know.

What do you feel a good time for it would be? 2 or 3 minutes? Doesn't seem too long honestly. Also, another thing entirely, would you have to do this for each bone at a time or is it a one set time mends all bones?

I recently have started to interact with Mofo's characters. From the rp that he has shown during out interactions. I feel confident enough this application a +1

You know you are in the good when an admin gives you a +1

I feel like this may have been forgotten. It seems like a good idea and makes sense lore wise. Just sort of wanted to bump this.