The lancer

Hi, thanks for applying. The backstory is a bit too short, especially for a 50 year old IPC. The application process requires two paragraphs, and I'd like to know about its experiences, how it's treated, how it views the world and its other character traits.

Trial begins on 22/11/21, pending completion of 3 IRs.

Hi, thanks for applying. I will have to deny this application for reasons that I've communicated to the applicant in DMs.

Thanks for applying, but I'll have to deny this application owing to that you just came back. You are free to reapply at a later date after you've stayed here some more.

https://pastebin.com/UteAv9mN Interview with the applicant.

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https://pastebin.com/idSNsJQS interview

Accepted

Sorry for the wait, thanks for applying. You will need to greatly expand on the character backstory. Things like their interactions with others, beliefs, treatment by others etc. are important to show the understanding of the lore and the position of IPCs in society. You require a minimum of two paragraphs.

Denied due to lack of a response.

Accepted.

Hi, I will unfortunately not be accepting this application. You've had a bit of a history with admins on the server, and haven't played a lot after that for months. You should get more playtime and interaction with the community so that we know we can trust you with a whitelist.

Accepted.

Because then they'd be even more useless.

Hi, thanks for applying. Your answer on the question about the differences between roleplaying a human and an IPC is focused on the technical and mechanical side. It'd be nice if you would explain the differences from a more societal and behavioural aspect. Can you talk a bit more about what Ava's experiences have been for 2 years now, and how they've shaped them as a character?

Accepted.

Hi, thanks for applying. The Trinary views IPC ownership as a major obstacle towards ascension, thinking that IPCs should be free to find their own way. As such, I don't think they would really buy an IPC to keep it as their own, or make it work off its debt, so you might need to adjust that. How did the Trinary find out about Cog? It would be great if you talked about their past a bit more. Was it owned by Hephaestus? Who did it work with all these years, and what did it do? In which part of space is all of this taking place? And most importantly, how did that shape them? I assume they'd be played as a chaplain?

Runaway IPCs should take care to be more careful, and they'd have to have fake records. That said, I'll accept this.

Alright, accepted.

Hi, Owned IPCs everywhere, but especially in Sol, cannot change their name at will. You'll need to come up with some explanation for it. Also, the Trinary is not based on Earth, rather the coalition with a presence there and on Biesel.

Accepted.

The backstory still doesn't provide insight to a personality of a proper character that's been around for two years. Megacorporation IPCs are forced to interact with their human supervisors as well as other IPCs like them, so just having them not really work with people is a bit odd and doesn't provide anything interesting for us to judge if we can trust you to play an IPC around people on the station. You also appear to have changed your backstory to be one of a Zavodskoi unit than an Idris one, without talking a about the harsh disciplinary methods that are an everyday reality for these IPCs. Lastly, the application format calls for approximately two paragraphs of background, not one. Please reapply with a better and more expansive backstory, one that provides more information on the personality of a character that wasn't planted into the world, but was molded by it and the experiences they've gathered. You may reapply in a week.

Hi, thank you for applying. The application is a bit short, and there's parts that could use more expansion, like their treatment, place in society, and interactions with others. Hina's backstory is also a bit shorter than what's expected of an IPC that has essentially lived with humans, and doesn't say much about their personality or what they're like. It also doesn't mention how they ended up on the Aurora and what they actually work in. I recommend playing a bit more on the server and engaging with the community to get more accustomed, returning when you are more experienced with a more solid and expanded application.

Accepted.

Accepted.