Rhazajun Rhazakal-Jawdat feedback

[Guest Marlon Phoenix]

Jawdat is my Hop/tective Tajara. He's my oldest surviving character, and i've never made one of these feedback threads, so he's a good place to start.

Here's his employment history because he's like 3 years old so he's gone through a reboot so here's his records please stop pm'ing me about him being a CSI he's not if you PM me again I will call the police.

2.3.2426

Born.

6.2.2442

Age: 16. Entered People's Youth Patriots organization. Earned merit badge for punctuality.

4.3.2444

Age: 18. Gained Associate in Accounting in Nal'Tor Community College, Adhomai Continued schooling for Bachelors in Business with minor in Criminal Forensics.

8.1.2444

Age: 18. Employment as a clerical assistant in the People's Republic Internal Revenue Service.

11.7.2457

Age: 21. Gained Bachelors in Business from Nal'Tor Community College with minor in Criminal Forensics.

1.9.2448

Age: 22. Promoted to Criminal Investigation Special Agent. Handles tax fraud for the PRIRS.

4.5.2450

Age: 25. Employment with Nanotrasen begins. Internal Affairs intern for NMSS Odin, Tau Ceti.

4.5.2452

Age: 26. Promoted to Detective.

1.12.2456

Age: 30. (Houssam) Rrazujun Rrhazkal-Jawdat granted promotion to Head of Personnel, managing delegation of civilian departments.

2.3.2457

Age: 31. Gained a Masters in Business Management in the Biesel University of Business.

AUTHORIZED FOR:

Head of Personnel, Detective

 

negative comments will be DELETED and the posters will be BANNED

[Tomiix]

I'm just here so I don't get blocked.

 

[CommanderXor]

He makes me want to shoot all Tajara on sight.

[Guest Marlon Phoenix]

i've deleted 18 negative posts in this thread. please remember criticism of my character is criticism of ME.

[Munks]

how tf did you delete my posts admins ban this hacker

[Butterrobber202]

i've deleted 18 negative posts in this thread. please remember criticism of my character is criticism of ME.

ur a weeb

[Pacmandevil]

he is what he eats. and I distinctly recall feeding him a meatball

[hivefleetchicken]

he's pretty cool. i appreciate him helping me set up records. delete him

[Guest Menown]

It's hard not calling him Houssam. It really is.

[Guest Marlon Phoenix]

Bump

[Bygonehero]

Jawdat was the tajara that got me to read tajara lore. That being said, they are goofy, but in a wholesome way. I am not sure if theres a better way to describe it, but, for me at least, I always feel like I am communicating with someone that lets their natural charisma work for them. Jawdat is goofy, but also intensely likable. He inspires loyalty and generally keeps apprised of the situations that do occur, rather than let them trample him underfoot.

To put it in more simple terms, he is not a casual observer, something that regularly plagues the HoP role.

[SampleTex]

I love Jawdat. Not too serious but doesn't slack off. He will let security do its own thing (unless he's an antag) instead of making a crew milita to fend off [insert team antag here].

The round I remember the most was when I was playing my Forensic Technician and they were going around sniping people. In the end I accused them, and OOC I knew it was them in the end, but ICly the interaction with my character giving them the benefit of the doubt (because Brazilians love their Xenos) and their joke about their Tiedie shirt left me with a smile.