coolbc2000 Posted December 16, 2015 Posted December 16, 2015 (edited) BYOND key:Coolbc2000 Character names:Mark Syion, Mary Syion, Tyrone Syion, Richard Syion (May he rest in Peace) How long have you been playing on Aurora?:Oh...For about 3-4 Months now? Yeah that is about right. Why do you wish to be on the whitelist?:I wish to become a whitelist because, i would like to expierence more then just the normal boring job's you do every shift, but to interact, Have staff under you, from where they can learn from you and expierence thing's they do not know. Why did you come to Aurora?:I came to Aurora to seek new way's of playing the Game, Not just Chucklefucking around a station, where god Forbid a clown trip's you with his PDA, take's your ID and HONK'S, But really, this place is fun to play and has a great Community Have you read the BS12 wiki on the head roles you plan on playing?:But of course, Also with my 4 year's of playing SS13. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph each. Give a definition of what you think roleplay is, and should be about:Hmm...Roleplaying is about pretending to be someone else, Remebering what they remember and expierenceing thing's that are similiar to you. Roleplay is pretty much a second you (Or someone completey someone not you).And really, it is about having fun, and fun for everyone else. What do you think the OOC purpose of a Head of Staff is, ingame?:That is a hard question. Head's of staff are Leader's in there own right. Being very strict/Lean they are there to make sure the Department is succesful at the end of the shift. You show your staff that "Hey, there is a reason why i am the boss here and not you" Mentality. What do you think the OOC responsibilities of Whitelisted players are to other players, and how would you strive to uphold them?:Well, Being whitelisted has a certin respect to it, having a whitelist mean's he is not just a random player who just chucklefuck's around the round, but that he let's people RP with him and have a aspect of fun to it. Please pick one of your characters for this section, and provide well articulated responses to the following questions. Character name: Mark Syion Character age: 49 Please provide a short biography of this character (approx 2 paragraphs): Mark was born under a very Rich family, His father being one of a Supreme Justice's on the Tau Ceti court, His mother being a well respected Surgeon aboard the station, And his Step-Brother Richard Syion (All hail Richard Syion, the real asshole aboard the station) A mad scientist hell bent on showing that he is a Genius. Mark was a strong child, picking fight's when he can, and trying to get into all sort's of trouble. At the age of 15 his parent's had enough of him, sending him to Military School. Showing amazing result's, the commander asked his Parent's if he could train the child into Military service, after some convinceing, the Parent's agreed. 5 year's the program took, Breaking his Body and his Very will, he was a slave to his Commander. After being recruited into Biesel Secret Service, His total amout of Operation's is Unknown, But his final Operation (Operation Burning Phoenix) being the Operation where he retired, his Goal was to infiltrate the Syndicate (His knowledge of the syndicate was kept unknown, Only knowing that is was a group of deadly killer's). After the operation went wrong, Taking minor Radiation Damage and a scar, he retired. Trying to find a nice easy place to live the rest of his life, he got a degree in Buissness and settled down where his Mother was working. What do you like about this character?:His is a total Badass, not to think his is Chuck norris, Or is He? But respectable and hard working. What do you dislike about this character?:Like his brother, he is a kinda bit..Of a asshole. What do you think makes this character fit to be a head of staff?:Being a Leader, he strive's to be Head of Security and to kick the security into a new Golden Era, Hail Auroura. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions. How would you rate your own roleplaying?:I would say... 7/10 For making myself know to the community and stuff. Aka The lord Himself, Richard Syion. Extra notes:Oh god if this get's accepted...You might die if you try and fuck with him just kidding of course ^^ Edited December 16, 2015 by Guest
Dreamix Posted December 16, 2015 Posted December 16, 2015 Mark Syion. I haven't really seen them roleplaying lately, but the last time I've seem him as a interim HoS, he've been fine. Guiding officers around, trying to maintain peace, even ordered officers to patrol in pairs. That's a +1
Killerhurtz Posted December 16, 2015 Posted December 16, 2015 -1. The fact that Richard Syion got fired sits wrong with me.
coolbc2000 Posted December 16, 2015 Author Posted December 16, 2015 -1. The fact that Richard Syion got fired sits wrong with me. The reason Richard got fired is because I made him a asshole, it has nothing to do with OCC matter`s or even IC matters Facts stand, mark is not nearly on the same level as Richard. And if I may ask, does a character really reflect a person OCCly? If so tell me why, because there is absolutely no reason to pick on someone because there character got fired, I knew he wa going to get fired sooner or later. If anything that is good RP, sometimes I hated Richard for who he was and really questioned if I should deleate him. But I could not because he a soft spot on my heart
Guest Marlon Phoenix Posted December 17, 2015 Posted December 17, 2015 -1. The fact that Richard Syion got fired sits wrong with me. The reason Richard got fired is because I made him a asshole, it has nothing to do with OCC matter`s or even IC matters Facts stand, mark is not nearly on the same level as Richard. And if I may ask, does a character really reflect a person OCCly? If so tell me why, because there is absolutely no reason to pick on someone because there character got fired, I knew he wa going to get fired sooner or later. If anything that is good RP, sometimes I hated Richard for who he was and really questioned if I should deleate him. But I could not because he a soft spot on my heart Duty Officers don't fire you for being an asshole.
coolbc2000 Posted December 17, 2015 Author Posted December 17, 2015 -1. The fact that Richard Syion got fired sits wrong with me. The reason Richard got fired is because I made him a asshole, it has nothing to do with OCC matter`s or even IC matters Facts stand, mark is not nearly on the same level as Richard. And if I may ask, does a character really reflect a person OCCly? If so tell me why, because there is absolutely no reason to pick on someone because there character got fired, I knew he wa going to get fired sooner or later. If anything that is good RP, sometimes I hated Richard for who he was and really questioned if I should deleate him. But I could not because he a soft spot on my heart Duty Officers don't fire you for being an asshole. You sure? Beside's the one round of Chucklefuckery, Richard is really just a asshole
Alberyk Posted December 17, 2015 Posted December 17, 2015 one round of Chucklefuckery I remember when Richard went rogue with a ripley and tried to vent the maint with my hos inside, just to have its exosuit and his ribs crushed. Also, when in an extended round he resisted arrest using a research advanced pistol, firing with laser against the officers. Both times he died, also he did so as a non antag. Anyway, not sure about the ultra secret agent background which is really snowflake. However, I believe that the player can improve in and be a competent head of staff. Until then; -1.
coolbc2000 Posted December 17, 2015 Author Posted December 17, 2015 one round of Chucklefuckery I remember when Richard went rogue with a ripley and tried to vent the maint with my hos inside, just to have its exosuit and his ribs crushed. Also, when in an extended round he resisted arrest using a research advanced pistol, firing with laser against the officers. Both times he died, also he did so as a non antag. Anyway, not sure about the ultra secret agent background which is really snowflake. However, I believe that the player can improve in and be a competent head of staff. Until then; -1. The Ripley round was to scare you off, so you could not capture me, But thank you for the feedback that was long ago.
ForgottenTraveller Posted December 17, 2015 Posted December 17, 2015 As a DO to clarify on why Richard was fired. It was not because he was an asshole. It was due to his records and actions. Now I am aware that Coolbc has been talked to about his records and offered help to improve them. Please do not take the following as an attack. It is to point out notable issues that existed in your role play attempts before now. One having your parent and professions in your employment, medical and security records. At the most parents would be listed in you medical records by name only. Living or dead notes optional. You were not employed due to your parent's job if you were. Nepotism which can get them and you fired. - OrpahnAdoptive Parents: Jake Syion, Marry Syion - Jake Syion: One of the 7 Justices on the Tau Ceti Supreme Court - Marry Syion: House Wife - Brother(Step): Mark Syion Employment record Age issues. Age:46 2456-2418=38 Date of Birth: Aug 10, 2418 ?2410? Pre-NanoTrasen Employment History: - 2438 Employment as independent contractor: Engineer Formal Education History: - Enrolled in Oxford Academy. Major: Engineering,Roboticts,Electronics,Science NanoTrasen Employment History: - 2440 Contract signed. Roboticist - 2430 Contract signed. Enginnering - 2425 Contract signed. Science. (Very Young Age, Has the Same Average IQ as a adult at the time) 2425 - 2418 = 7 Doctoral position on staff with NT at age 7 ?15-Still to young?. Aka the length of time most people spend in university to get close to that. Forget high school, intermediate school, primary school, and kindergarten. Which usually lasts 17 to 18 years. Let us not forget child labour laws. And the minimum age requirements we have for many positions. Also employed as an independent contractor during his contract with NT 8 years after signing. Pre means before. Security Record - Dislikes talking, Very Aggresive Likes talking a lot. Likes talking aggressively. And was repeatedly reprimanded for starting aggressive and abusive conversations. If you are setting up your character to dislike talking they should not be the most chatty Cathy on station. Medical Record Public Security Notes: - This man is a Born True Asshole. Should never ever be on any record or flavour text EVER - He will start something every shift. FIRED Not worth having a troublemaker. - He is arrogant because he is well educated. Acceptable character note that if better worded could find its way into a psych record. Still generally terrible. - He is also the step-son of a Powerful man. Should never ever be on any record or flavour text EVER. No one cares about who your daddy is. Especially the records department. And especially your personal psych profile. Jake should not be so prominent in other peoples records. Psychiatric History: - 2449 - Psych not able to give final word... Not hired in the first place until word given. Psychiatric Notes: - Unstable Fired or given leave from work until of a sound mind. Now for Mary Syion. The housewife. gen_record Name: Mary Syion Date of Birth: Aug 10, 2395 62 Species: Huma Gender: Female Citizenship: Republic of Biesel. Clearance Level: Medical Doctor Employed As: Medical Doctor Height: 186 cm (6'1") Weight: 62 kg (136.69 lb) Identifying Features: Scar on her Lip. Lot of lip scars in this family General Notes: - Mary Syion is a very well educated woman. Entirely redundant She spends most of her time in Medical checking documents and wasting time. Offical records have her wasting time. FIRED She has been cloned 2 times this is why she looks so young. Cloning has nothing to do with age Public Security Notes: Mary is a Mother of two. A wife to Jake Syion One of seven Justice's on the supreme court of Tau Ceti. Why is this a security issue. And again. Why do we care about their jobs. At most it would be titles only. eg. Justice Jake Syion or Honourable Justice Syion. Either way. It would be listed under spouse in medical. Not here. Experience: - Medical: 45 Years From age 17, Year 2411 8 years prior to enrollment - Command: 10 Years - Engineering: 2 years Formal Education History: - 2419: Enrolled in Oxford Academy. Major: Medicine-Special:Surgery. - 2423: Graduates Oxford Academy. Four year degree in Medicine-Special:Surgery. - - 2428: Enrolled in Oxford Academy. Major: Engineering. - 2430: Does not finish Engineering Degree because of Personal Reason's. Why take it to begin with? - 2431: Enrolled in Oxford Academy. PhD: Medicine-Special:Surgery. - 2439: Graduates Oxford Academy. PhD in Medicine-Special:Surgery. - - 2441: Enrolled in Oxford Academy. Major: Business. - 2445: Graduates Oxford Academy. Major in Command. Command is not a degree. Period - 2450: Enrolled in Oxford Academy. Major: Engineering - 2455: Graduates Oxford Academy. Major in Engineering. Again. Why? - 2357: Enrolled in Oxford Academy. PhD. in Business - In Progress 8 year degree in Command (7 years Remain) NanoTrasen Still not a degree. That makes 4 different and disparate majors These look like false records and were treated as such when he came into the DO eye after repeated altercations with crew and criminal acts including stabbing officers with screwdrivers. And actively challenged heads to fire him and deliberately antagonized DOs stating that as his dad was a judge he would be back the next day. You pick a fight with your boss to fire you. You are gonna get fired. And that is what happened. Please take notes for the future on the issues listed above. Edit note: S++ Clearance is not a thing. It was never a thing.
coolbc2000 Posted December 18, 2015 Author Posted December 18, 2015 Thank you for the clarification, I shall sort the record's out by just rewriteing the syion family
Dea Tacita Posted December 18, 2015 Posted December 18, 2015 I'm going to have to say -1 Coolbc himself seems like a decent enough guy. But staff have had to talk to him, repeatedly about making believable characters (Plus he also got reported to DOs), I'm not opposed to him becoming head-staff in the future. But I just, don't want another one of his ridiculous, unbelievable and unnecessarily overly educated (5 PH.Ds, 5 Masters, 8 Bachelors) characters in a head of staff position. If he works on this, and makes a decent character, then yeah sure! but not right now.
Frances Posted December 18, 2015 Posted December 18, 2015 But I just, don't want another one of his ridiculous, unbelievable and unnecessarily overly educated (5 PH.Ds, 5 Masters, 8 Bachelors) or just have him apply for skrell B)
coolbc2000 Posted December 19, 2015 Author Posted December 19, 2015 I WOULD like to clariy this right now. Richard Syion ONLY had 2 PhD's THAT IS ALL. He used to have that when i was new to the server, but i hit him with a Nerf hammer and changed him. It did not matter because he got fired and will now only be used in An-Tag round's but i just wanted to clear this up. I do have a hard time making new record's but i am still learning, The syion family has had it's record's changed and updated, and for reasureance, none of my new character's are Mary sue in any way.
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