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Alberyk

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  1. Rework headmaster Harrrdanim Tyr'adrr and added three new notable Tajara related to the pra: https://wiki.aurorastation.org/index.php?title=Notable_Tajara#People.27s_Republic
  2. It has been a while, so I will give you another chance. Appeal accepted.
  3. Change it how?
  4. Application accepted then.
  5. While the first two questions are rather succinct, the backstory was put a lot of effort into. While the character's story is fine, but it is missing an important part: how and why is the character working with NanoTrasen at Tau Ceti? I will ask for you to expand on that in the backstory and tell me what job you are planning on playing the character as. Also, one question: 1- What does Makjurl thinks of the DPRA and the NKA?
  6. SOLARIAN NAVY WITHDRAWS FROM COSTLY FRONTIER OPS! Data made public today by the Secretary of the Navy’s office depicts the situation in the Solarian southern frontier as extremely dire. The region bordering the Sparring Sea has seen a total recall of forces and is now entirely undefended; military command has discontinued armed patrols in the area and the few defensive installations in the region have been abandoned. Sources within the Solarian navy suggest that this conservation is a result of the nation’s dwindling phoron reserves, forcing the fleets to restrict their sojourns outside of the Core Worlds and instead congregating power around key Solarian planets. Thanks to the withdrawal of Alliance forces, incidents of smuggling and piracy have gone up in the frontier. Colonies and planets in the outer ring have expressed their discontent, with numerous officials claiming that the lack of security is having adverse effects on their local economies and quality of life. Angry citizens and politicians have voiced their outrage at the Alliance’s decision to retreat from their outer territories, accusing Sol of stripping vital and profitable resources from their local clusters before retreating back to the safety of the Core Worlds. Further complicating matters are reports of military in-fighting amongst Alliance brass, especially the admiralty. The situation in the Sol system has created a climate of distrust between veteran navy staff, who have begun to view each other as possible competitors in the race to be promoted to newly opened prestigious positions in the naval chain of command. Reports show a lack of confidence among rank-and-file enlisted and junior officers regarding the bombastic behavior of certain admirals. Some Solarian citizens seem unsurprised at the increasing lack of decorum within the Alliance military. Ex-officers and military officials describe a cut-throat culture of backstabbing and shadowy maneuvers in the upper echelons of the admiralty that has been the norm for years, further exacerbated by the phoron crisis and the heavy restrictions being placed upon the navy. With the majority of Sol’s battle groups forced to remain within the Core Worlds, inside sources describe a growing sensation of ‘cabin fever’, as fleets are grounded or ordered to remain stationary, leading to military personnel feeling hopeless, demoralized, and neglected. The disdain, restlessness, and lack of cooperation between commanding officers has become such a danger that it has forced the Solarian high command to announce their intentions of investigating the allegations. Senior members of the Alliance military have reassured reporters that any and all incidents of conduct unbecoming of an officer or insubordination will be properly disciplined as need be, and further disciplinary measures are being considered against admirals that refuse to patrol certain areas or engage in bald-faced attempts to undermine their peers in the officer corps.
  7. Added more regional lore to the DPRA page: https://wiki.aurorastation.org/index.php?title=Democratic_People's_Republic_of_Adhomai#Southern_Harr.27masir https://wiki.aurorastation.org/index.php?title=Democratic_People's_Republic_of_Adhomai#Din.27aak_Mountains
  8. It has been a while, so I will give you another chance. Appeal accepted.
  9. Eleven Dead in Venus Shootout; Three Admirals Among the Victims Venus' aerostats are on high alert after Athena's Temple was the site of a deadly shooting yesterday. The criminals, disguised as patrons, infiltrated one of the planet's high-class clubs and opened fire upon the clients. Armed with submachine guns and pistols, they killed eleven and injured ten more. A shootout between the terrorists and the security team followed after the attack. Despite the quick response of the officers, most of the group managed to escape. Two culprits were terminated during the fight, both were later identified as Adhomian nationals residing in the Sol Alliance through work visas. Falsified Republican credentials and documents were found in their possession. Athena's Temple administration confirmed that the suspects were all Tajara pretending to be People's Republic officials. Admiral Ikaia Iokua, Huan Li, and Amanda Hayden are among the confirmed fatalities. The deceased held prestigious positions within the fleets tasked with protecting the Sol system. The Admiralty has not released any announcement in regards to the incident. Intelligence agencies currently suspect the involvement of the Tajara Revolutionary Army in the crime. No organization has claimed responsibility for the attack yet. Venus' police department was alerted as soon the shooting started, but only arrived at the site one hour later. Law enforcement officials claim that conflicting reports caused the delay. Additional forces have been deployed to scour the surface and other aerostats in search of the remaining suspects. The late response was heavily criticized by Ishtar’s Temple administration and the population of the planet. Many fear that the lack of security might hurt tourism on the planet.
  10. Hi, since it seems that a lot of people are posting, I will make this clear; only post if you have something to add to the complaint, your opinion on how this should be solved or in regards to the involved parties is not enough, sorry.
  11. Tajaran Band Seeks Asylum in Tau Ceti Bloodstorm, the experimental Tajaran group that visited Tau Ceti in July, has returned to the system this week. However, sources indicate that this time they plan on staying. Lead frontman ‘Al-Atil Csihar’ told the Bugle in an exclusive interview that the band was forbidden from returning to Adhomai by the Democratic People’s Republic and as a result they are now forced to seek asylum within Biesel. Upon returning from their first extrasolar tour, they were stopped from leaving Crevus’ shuttle port by soldiers of the Liberation Army, who claimed to be acting under orders given by Supreme Commander Nated himself. Bloodstorm’s members were forbidden from returning to Adhomai under the threat of arrest. Upon hearing this, NanoTrasen representatives in the city provided the group transportation back to Tau Ceti. “We believe that art deserves to be represented, as it is a fundamental right”, stated the representative when questioned about his decision. “NanoTrasen Corporation condemns this type of censorship and respectfully requests that representatives of the Democratic People’s Republic review their decision in the best interest of galactic politics.” The public relations team at the DPRA embassy located within Mendell City has defended the motion, claiming that the band is a threat to the values defended by the Al’mariist ideology. Tau Ceti’s government has decided to grant Bloodstorm asylum until the situation has been resolved. Adhomian authorities have not returned a request for comment made by Bugle reporters.Vargir “Godslayer” Stenovich, the bassist of the band, announced that the group intends on continuing their careers in Biesel. “They’ll miss theirrr fans on Adhomai, but the [Slur Removed] are not gonna let them back, and the show must go on,” explained Stenovich. The troupe has settled in District Six, in an attempt to stay closer to their fans.
  12. Liberation Army Secures Amohda! The Liberation Army, under the wise leadership of Supreme Commander Nated, has successfully invaded and recaptured the rebellious state of Amohda. In the lead-up to the assault, a division of Hotak’s Commandos were dispatched to the island under cover of darkness. These elite soldiers infiltrated the isle’s interior and contacted loyal dissidents amongst the civilian populace. Working alongside these Al’mariist patriots, they seized radio towers and established contact with the Army. Despite fierce crackdowns and purges on the part of the separatists, a sizable resistance movement remained active in Amohda. The commandos also worked to undermine the traitorous separatists through sabotage and the elimination of key military officers and political targets. While coordinating with these brave freedom fighters, the Liberation Army focused its effort on securing a proper landing site for the amphibious assault. The northeast region of the island was chosen due to the low concentration of separatists forces and light fortifications. Air Brigade bombers soared high in the sky and bombarded enemy defenses and fortifications in a brutal display of military might, providing critical support for the transport vessels approaching the shoreline - ships that carried our patriots into battle. Members of the resistance engaged coastal garrisons as well, allowing landing crafts to reach the beaches unmolested. Hro’rammhad tanks and other light armored vehicles were deployed first to provide cover for troops as they disembarked. These brave, fearless soldiers charged forward through heavy machine gun fire and unrelenting artillery strikes, quickly overpowering the separatists with the help of the resistance guerilla fighters. With the coast secure, even more reinforcements and armor landed on the island to bolster the planned attack inland. The Amohdan rebels were no match for the might of the Liberation Army. As hardened, triumphant soldiers marched into the countryside, Al’mariist guerilla units joined them. Weapons caches were unearthed and retired soldiers took up arms in the defense of their Nation. The Liberation Army swept away the traitors with little effort, forcing them to rely on ambushes and other underhanded tactics. Desperate, separatist Amohdan warriors charged en masse in futile suicide runs against our forces, but were easily cut down before they could inflict serious casualties. Other, far more wise swordsmen brought their blades in service of Nated. In less than one week the Liberation Army reached the capital city. The city of Amohda was retaken after a brief skirmish - the city’s garrison fled their posts and abandoned their positions to avoid engaging in bloody urban warfare. The remaining rebels retreated from the other cities and concentrated their forces in the countryside. The Liberation Army currently occupies most of the island, with all major urban centers under its control. Task forces are scouring the countryside to eliminate pockets of the traitorous resistance. An offer of amnesty was also given to anyone that took part in the uprising and wishes to return to the rightful cause. Yaropolk Yazar, the traitorous Rrhaza-Akhran, could not be located; military command suspects that he escaped to the New Kingdom. The National Assembly praised the quick and precise response of the Liberation Army in safeguarding the future of the Democratic People’s Republic. Rahman Hajduk, a general loyal to the Al’mariist cause, was appointed as the new Rrhaza-Akhran of Amohda by Supreme Commander Nated.
  13. This is an issue. By the rules of the whitelist application, you should have at least played a bit in the server. I can't even find your ckey here, so you did not even connect once in the server. Sorry but it is the rules and can't really accept this application due to this. But, I have read it and I will leave some feedback, so you may re-apply in the future. This could be expanded upon. I guess you meant 2417 here. Same as above. This does not explain much in regards to what the character was even hired for. What is their job with NanoTrasen? What job would they even do while on the station. What did they do during these 26 years? It is kinda lacking in regards to the second revolution and the conflict between the factions. It also does not expand on what the character's believe or why they don't support any of the sides here. The application explores the first revolution, but it forgets to touch upon the second revolution and the most recent events. Even if your character was affiliated with the nobility, and somehow still supports them, there is always the New Kingdom. Exploring the cold war between the faction would be benefitial to the application. While I am not an english native speaker and my grammar can be somewhat dodgy at times, the backstory was kinda hard to read due to the lack of basic punctuation and how the sentences were structured. I recommend trying to get someone else to review and help you out with this, but take in consideration that a lot of roleplay will be done via writing in game, so you should strive to at least have some acceptable level of grammar. Anyway, I will have to deny this due to the whitelist rules. From what I can see, you did read it and have a grasp in regards to the lore, but you have to play a bit in the server before I can consider giving you a whitelist. After you played one or two weeks, you can reapply taking in consideration the feedback I left here. There is passion in your writing, but there is also a lot of stuff that should be improved as well. If you have any doubt, you can contact me here in the forums or in the discord. We also have a lore discord that you can join to discuss the lore. Application denied for now.
  14. Poll is happening soon.
  15. This application display more than enough knowledge in regards to the Tajara lore and knows how to use it well to create a character. Application accepted.
  16. Sorry, but not happening. This is linked to someone that kept trying to ban evade after being banned. This is the 32th time that they have tried to ban evade and our ban system caught something that links both ckeys. Appeal denied.
  17. No, they have no hands.
  18. From my experience, most erts don't de-escalate anything and just kill the antags anyway. Descalation can be done just as fine by the crew.
  19. Bombs Explodes Across New Hai Phong: Terrorist Organization Claims Responsibility! A series of bombs exploded simultaneously across New Hai Phong yesterday, striking several cities such as Nhom Hy Vong, authorities said. A total of eight explosives were detonated within major Hephaestus Industries centers. A shipyard in orbit was also targeted during the attacks. Officials have confirmed at least 500 fatalities and 6000 wounded. According to forensic experts, military-grade charges were utilized. The placement of the devices suggests that the perpetrators had extensive knowledge in the use of explosives. Life in New Hai Phong has come to a halt as the planet is currently under lockdown by Solarian and Hephaestus security forces. Police and emergency services in the middle colonies are now at full alert in case of further incidents. The Tajara Revolutionary Army, an organization deemed as terrorist by the government, has claimed responsibility for the attacks. They have sent an announcement to major news outlets, including the Sol Alliance Network: The news of the bombings was met with protests by the population in the inner and outer colonies. Many blame the government for the attack, claiming that the Alliance is unable to provide adequate security for their worlds. Human Unity representatives are calling for a third Tajara ban in the wake of the tragedy, this motion resulted in outrage over the extranet and objection from Xeno rights groups. Tajaran embassies denied involvement in the situation.
  20. Added the gakal'zaal page after the conclusion of its arc https://wiki.aurorastation.org/index.php?title=Gakal'zaal
  21. The Free Republic of Gakal’zaal Joins the Nation Weeks after the liberation of Gakal’zaar from alien domination, the people of the planet have made another step towards the future of the Tajara. They have decided, through a fair and direct referendum, to join the Democratic People’s Republic of Adhomai. The colony becomes an autonomous state; it is given the freedom to deal with most of its internal matters while being protected by the Adhomai Liberation Army. A military government, controlled by Commander Andranik Huwaytat, remains in place to guarantee a safe transition. Liberation Front's freedom fighters has been incorporated into the ranks of the Liberation Army. The Unathi population in Gakal’zaar is allowed to live and prosper on the planet in peace. However, the feudal structures and nobility titles have been completely abolished. The existing guilds are being nationalized, following a mixed model that exists in our Republic. Both Tajara and Unathi will be given the rights to their work. Freedom of religion is extended to any alien living in Gakal’zaar, with proselytizing still being forbidden. In an attempt to mend the relationship between both species, President Almrah Harrlala and the national assembly decided to lift the embargo against the Hegemony and pay the necessary reparations for the loss of Gakal’zaal. The Izweski Nation recognized the incorporation of the planet, forfeiting any claim to it. Despite these acts, President Harrlala has made clear that our Republic is not willing to stand down to any alien oppressor.
  22. Like it was done with ninja, another solution is probably rebrand wizard for it to have more lore friendly options.
  23. This is likely an issue to do with computer ids, will look into it.
  24. This was added as a notable television show in the pra tv section. Thanks for your contribution.
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