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[Denied]A'lyx Lemire Tajran Application


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BYOND Key:Dudewithatude

Character Names:A'lyx Lemire

Species you are applying to play:Tajara

What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Purple and Pink

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?:Yes



Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question


Why do you wish to play this specific race:Tajara is my main character on the other servers. I'll admit, I've 'snowflaked' up his bio a bit, but I find my roleplay style well suits it. While I'm okay playing humans, having played space station 13 since Android Data owned it, I've gotten... bored, of just role playing a typical human. I just find it much more exciting to be another species.


Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: I find that as a 'cat' I can get away with doing things, such as being silly, or lazing about. While humans are generally seen as more 'stable' elements, cats are rather random and unpredictable. This can make playing a trickster role, or a mysterious role ,a lot easier roleplay wise, since the species is kind of built for it.

 



Character Name:A'lyx Lemire

Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs


(If this is too 'snowflakey' I apologize)


A'lyx Lemire is a unique Tajara, in that he didn't come from Adhomai. He was actually born of Terra. Born in a rather unusual forest, A'lyx is a Chesire breed of Tajara, purple with pink stripes, and glowing yellow eyes. Nothing is known about his parents or lineage, as his earliest memories were of terrorizing humans who had invaded his forest. Having lived in the forest most of his life, living off eating small critters and playing tricks on humans, it wasn't until a science team wandered in the woods to analyze the strange readings, that he was captured, at age 9.


Being brought to a lab, most of his personality was tamed right away. While retaining some of his trickster ways, he was taught civility and educated intensely, as a project to see if a 'feral' Tajara could be integrated into society. As A'lyx was quick to pick up on things, he was quick to learn. A long 6 years later, he was given a choice on what profession he would take, wanting him to become a productive member of society. A'lyx had always found the medical team dealing with him to be most interesting, as whenever he had hurt himself, he was healed almost right away. Thinking that to be the most noble profession, he decided to choose doctor. 2 years of medical study later, he was released, and assigned to a post, to be observed as he interacted with society.



What do you like about this character?

Everything. A'lyx is years and years of fine tuning a space station 13 character. Having gone through the different races, and picked and thought over, A'lyx Lemrie is the closest thing I can come to being truly happy wit ha character.


How would you rate your role-playing ability?

It really depends. I've been role playing since 2006, back on Byond Table Top gaming. Having drifted from that, to the free form role plays of Brood Star Tavern Remake, Morning Star Inn, and World of Empires, I have quite the bit of byond role playing experience. I transitioned to Space Station 13 in 2007, when I realized how fun sprite based role play, rather then text based could be. I've been on and off role playing since



Notes:

http://i.imgur.com/zV3QaEm.png

The doctor will see you now~

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Ignoring the fact that this is flagrantly ignoring the lore, you cannot whitelist with a Tajaran that is not born on Adhomai.

 

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Also, this.

 

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I must say that if the character as it is now is what you truly want in your character, you may want to play somewhere else because I cannot see it being accepted in any form here.

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What do you like about this character?

Everything. A'lyx is years and years of fine tuning a space station 13 character. Having gone through the different races, and picked and thought over, A'lyx Lemrie is the closest thing I can come to being truly happy wit ha character.

 

 

You did a bad job of fine-tuning. You've ignored every tenet of our Tajaran lore. Let me re-direct you appropriately to servers that are more supportive of furries in general, and non-normal Tajara:


https://nanotrasen.se/forum/ (Paradise Server)


https://ss13polaris.com/ (Polaris)


This is a -1 from me, clearly.

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Jesus. Paying for OC artistry is one thing, doing it with the expectation that you'll immediately get accepted for an RP character/species is another. This is a finely written bait application, I applaud you taking the effort and spending the necessary funds to do this but you should probably find a way to get your money back if you explicitly think you'll get this app accepted with that character design. Or like, go to Paradise with it, or something.


This is still a gem of an application. We see too few of these.

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BYOND Key:Dudewithatude

Character Names:A'lyx Lemire

Species you are applying to play:Tajara

What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Purple and Pink

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?:Yes



Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question


Why do you wish to play this specific race:Tajara is my main character on the other servers. I'll admit, I've 'snowflaked' up his bio a bit, but I find my roleplay style well suits it. While I'm okay playing humans, having played space station 13 since Android Data owned it, I've gotten... bored, of just role playing a typical human. I just find it much more exciting to be another species.


Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: I find that as a 'cat' I can get away with doing things, such as being silly, or lazing about. While humans are generally seen as more 'stable' elements, cats are rather random and unpredictable. This can make playing a trickster role, or a mysterious role ,a lot easier roleplay wise, since the species is kind of built for it.

 



Character Name:A'lyx Lemire

Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs


(If this is too 'snowflakey' I apologize)


A'lyx Lemire is a unique Tajara, in that he didn't come from Adhomai. He was actually born of Terra. Born in a rather unusual forest, A'lyx is a Chesire breed of Tajara, purple with pink stripes, and glowing yellow eyes. Nothing is known about his parents or lineage, as his earliest memories were of terrorizing humans who had invaded his forest. Having lived in the forest most of his life, living off eating small critters and playing tricks on humans, it wasn't until a science team wandered in the woods to analyze the strange readings, that he was captured, at age 9.


Being brought to a lab, most of his personality was tamed right away. While retaining some of his trickster ways, he was taught civility and educated intensely, as a project to see if a 'feral' Tajara could be integrated into society. As A'lyx was quick to pick up on things, he was quick to learn. A long 6 years later, he was given a choice on what profession he would take, wanting him to become a productive member of society. A'lyx had always found the medical team dealing with him to be most interesting, as whenever he had hurt himself, he was healed almost right away. Thinking that to be the most noble profession, he decided to choose doctor. 2 years of medical study later, he was released, and assigned to a post, to be observed as he interacted with society.



What do you like about this character?

Everything. A'lyx is years and years of fine tuning a space station 13 character. Having gone through the different races, and picked and thought over, A'lyx Lemrie is the closest thing I can come to being truly happy wit ha character.


How would you rate your role-playing ability?

It really depends. I've been role playing since 2006, back on Byond Table Top gaming. Having drifted from that, to the free form role plays of Brood Star Tavern Remake, Morning Star Inn, and World of Empires, I have quite the bit of byond role playing experience. I transitioned to Space Station 13 in 2007, when I realized how fun sprite based role play, rather then text based could be. I've been on and off role playing since



Notes:

http://i.imgur.com/zV3QaEm.png

The doctor will see you now~

 

It surely seems like you are lying when you say that you have read the lore page of the species, because I see zero evidence of that in this application. You say your application is a "bit" snowflakey, but the truth is that your character is just a pile of snow, not fitting the current lore in the slightest, but specially the colouring. We have strict rules of how Tajara can be coloured, depending entirely on their race. The race you mention here is non-existant in our lore. Our lore is not flexible.


I urge to take a look at the wiki pages of the Tajaran, and fix this application, as I am pretty sure the lore overseer of the species will not be happy when he sees the application, and will possibly deny it quite quickly.


Also, as outlined already by Jackpot, please fix the formatting.


Thank you.

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[mention]Senpai Jackboot[/mention] I was bored and amused by the amazingness of this application and did some digging around. The application is in violation of this rule here:

All applicants are required to have a played character on the Aurora [...]

 

He has not played a single round here. And only has 3 connections logged.


I also can't tell if this app is a meme or just silly. Because who the fuck is Android Data.

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