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The sandstone colored ligger who has been described from an enraged bullshark waiting to be set loose on mere prey to a stoic and gentle sweetheart of a man with a lot of restraint and empathy.


Hes a pretty complex character with a lot of **SHOCKING** background beliefs and can be your devil or your angle given the context. I just want to know what people think of what they generally think of him on normal shifts and their thoughts on this thinking.


 

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(In case the name doesnt ring a bell

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Guest Complete Garbage

Ah yeah, we gonna get busy one time

For the motherfuckin bitches out there on Moghes

To this slow, slow, slow ass beat

We got my man Taz in the house

My man Ksi'ka, my man Azarak

And I am the incredible MC Zar

And my man Yizra Unzi gonna do it somethin like this


[Verse 1]

This is the ballad of a menace

Not to be confused with that of a grimace

I'm in this to be number one, when I step upon

And walk the halls, grab the balls, like that of a predator

Blow the brains out the head of my competitors

I'm a product of your sins, though you say I never heard of ya

A killer, SD dealer, ligga murderer

Merciless maniac, monical manipulation

Primary focus of your local corpsec station

I roll cold in my 'gax

Pumpin sounds that are great, doin a jack move

As I groove, the ligga melody

Heads are cracked to a nine year old

And I've been told pimpin hoes is a felony

But I'm not a doctor or lawyer I wasn't made to be

Ever Luciferic because I get paid to be

There ain't no rehabilitatin, pull a spear on your clanmother

Then take her social security

The boundary lines of Izweski nation expands

From day to day, ruler of all I survey

And with that, load up my gat then I pack

So I can buzz on the suckers that you replenish

This is the ballad of a menace


[Verse 2]

This is a ballad of a menace, Zar will finish and diminish

All the suckers that thought they could flow like me that was in this

Society wishes for my death, or my downfall

But they're playin theyself, as if they playin some roundball

Cause I'm terrorizin, all the wasteland I'm steppin on

Endangerin citizens while I'm keepin my weapon on

My hip like a psycho, cause to me it's hospitable

I just got word, the OG liggas was critical

Let's get it straight, the ones that want some can come with that

Illiterate motherfuckers I make you look dumb with that

Stumble and fumble cause I'mma crush til you crumble

So you can stutter and stutter but keep it down to a mumble

MC Zar is never taken as the sucker

In other words, I'm a bad motherfucker

So next time I walk your halls you should know

To bolt your doors, and close your windows

And if you was thinkin that protection could stop me

It takes a continent full of liggas to drop me

And for me to be vicious yo it's valid

While I'm conductin and producin

A ballad of a motherfuckin menace


[Verse 3]

I carry my balls just like a gauge

Nobody's safe when I'm enraged

Validhunt the suckers and weak motherfuckers

That run in fear, I'm the menace to misery

Answer the knock at your door and vote for the CT delivery

Best known for bein unsympathetic when I pick em

Cause sympathy is for the pathetic and to the victim

Spear one and spear another mercy is my only incapacity

Yo cause I'm a hard ligga

Maniacal madman, son of honor yo

Fine to go to hell, since I was an embryo

A criminal, standin in a ligga pose

Steppin with Zar the villain slappin up all the hoes

Your mother your sister your daughter your wife

And if you was reincarnated I would snatch your second life

In it for the money, down for me myself and I

You see, and fuck the community

I know in conclusion that death is my destiny

But fuck it, be stabbin motherfuckers that's left to me

So write my malevolent epitath, put it in the book of Guiness

And title it, The Ballad of a Menace

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Fucking Shaskala Sakaei

I never did so I can't post any feedback my dude.


But




Shalashaska "Revolver" Sakaei is a prude as any unathi with a clan name is but sometimes I notice you take it a bit too far, and while I do appreciate and like an actually confronting force in my roleplay to stirr other people into action and keep them on their toes instead of constant glomp/hugging, you just take it too damn far.


Not always mind you, but it's still there, often I can see you getting physical with people and humans to the point where it goes past harassment and enters assault territory.

It's acceptable from someone who's been on the station for a few weeks but your lizard has been quite active and for quite a time to the point where this kind of behaviour should have been whipped out of him at this point.

The one incident that comes into mind was basically smacking an officer on the table, cuffing them and taunting them over and over after they gave you a half-witty insult. (This was a few weeks back)


Otherwise there is the ever so rare "memeoff" with other characters which I'm not a fan of where you basically flash jokes and one-up each other until one of you gives up and while I'm no prude memeing in that volume stops being fun and starts being annoying.


Otherwise I have no other issue with the character.

The player is another story.

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Fucking Shaskala Sakaei

I never did so I can't post any feedback my dude.


But




Shalashaska "Revolver" Sakaei is a prude as any unathi with a clan name is but sometimes I notice you take it a bit too far, and while I do appreciate and like an actually confronting force in my roleplay to stirr other people into action and keep them on their toes instead of constant glomp/hugging, you just take it too damn far.


Not always mind you, but it's still there, often I can see you getting physical with people and humans to the point where it goes past harassment and enters assault territory.

It's acceptable from someone who's been on the station for a few weeks but your lizard has been quite active and for quite a time to the point where this kind of behaviour should have been whipped out of him at this point.

The one incident that comes into mind was basically smacking an officer on the table, cuffing them and taunting them over and over after they gave you a half-witty insult. (This was a few weeks back)


Otherwise there is the ever so rare "memeoff" with other characters which I'm not a fan of where you basically flash jokes and one-up each other until one of you gives up and while I'm no prude memeing in that volume stops being fun and starts being annoying.


Otherwise I have no other issue with the character.

The player is another story.

 

Sakaei is designed to be an aggressive and violent man. I have noted a few times in which I know I have taken it too far but I'm pretty sure those are in the past and were only in contexts in which things were going to shit in the round. I can't promise he won't smack talk someone he's pinning after they've BETRAYED the law but I am pretty sure I've stopped being unrealistic.


I myself don't enjoy memeoffs myself unless they're short and end very quickly. When they last a whole round, I too am usually pretty annoyed by it.

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Guest Marlon Phoenix

He's aggressive and he can be confrontational, but it's not out of nowhere or on a hair trigger. The conflicts he usually falls into are when his traditional unathi upbringing and culture butt heads with the xeno expectations and co-workers he's working with. He's got a lot of good characterization.

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