Sadly, your nymph play is not that good. I don't know your other characters so I can't comment on how you play in general, but neither your naming nor your behaviour is really good, when you play a nymph. I know Diona lore is not much, in comparison to other species. I assume you're new and it's nice that you show interest, but I recommend observing other gestalts, even though they are played rarely and learn/ask from them.
Also, aside from all that, what is said above. While the story is creative it's quite short and barebones, maybe you should rewrite it. Also, I still don't understand why people are being allowed to play nymphs without a whitelist, lmao, but that's just a side remark.