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Some questions: Which Al'mariist school of political thought she relates the most with? What are her objectives with going to Tau Ceti? What is she strying to achieve?

This is a Hharar color. The second revolution is one of the most important events in the Tajaran history, Can't really just ignore it. Unsure why he would refer to himself like that. The application has little to no Tajaran lore elements in it alongside with a couple of big errors. You should incorporate the lore and Tajaran events way more when making a character. It is hard to say that you are interested in the lore when your character ignores it and you don't make use of it when writing the application. Application denied.

It is limiting because you just have to answer the questions and can't explore any other angles. You can already answer all of these questions with an open backstory, while you can only answer these questions with your suggestion and nothing more. Creativity allows for people to incorporate elements of the lore in their characters.

Party Publishes Report on National Nuclear Threat Preparedness 04.05.2464 Due to the growing rebel aggression and development of weapons of mass destruction, the People's Republic has invested greatly in keeping its people safe from this growing threat. Despite the deterrence arsenal, President Hadii believes that the Al'mariists plan to use their missiles in the future. In a Party meeting today, the Ministry of Internal Affairs delivered a complete report on the preparations made in case of a nuclear exchange. Since the last year, several bunkers were built in public buildings and living complexes; specialists speculate that ⅓ of the entire population has access to fallout shelters. These bunkers have enough supplements to last for five months. Each unit has a small first aid kit equipped with anti-radiation medicine. All supplied food is canned and water is provided by a filtration system. Individual houses have been excluded from the project due to logistic concerns; Tajara living in non-apartment homes were instructed to seek refuge in government buildings. Communal farms will have access to one bunker large enough to shelter all families working in the unit. This expansion was only possible thanks to deals made by Party Secretary Yakiv Hadii with megacorporations. Educational videos on how to behave during a nuclear exchange are broadcasted daily to all homes throughout the state-provided television set. Children in schools are also taught the same instructions in a special class. To further prepare the population, Minister of Education Kalim Khazdar announced the introduction of drills to the learning institutions. Medicine colleges are currently working to develop more efficient radiation treatments alongside the Ministry of Research. The Grand People's Army is expected to play a decisive role in this scenario. Following the first strike, all forces will quickly mobilize to secure essential resources and defensive positions. To guarantee the soldier's safety during these operations, President Hadii ordered the development of an armored hazmat suit. Minister of Defense Irbaykhan Mirarkiizar and Minister of Technology Zhuldyz Hadii were assigned to oversee this project. After the nuclear fallout settles and the enemies of Hadiism are defeated, specialized teams will leave the shelters for the clean-up. Highly radioactive regions will be cordoned in exclusion zones, while areas deemed safe will undergo a cleaning process. In the countryside, centimeters of the topsoil will be removed and surviving crops and animals will be destroyed. In the cities, every building will be examined and washed with a soap solution. All Tajara will undergo a monthly examination for any symptoms of radiation poisoning. Minister of Education Kalim Khazdar suggested the establishment of a seed bank to secure a healthy supply of Adhomian plants. At the end of the meeting, Minister of Defense Irbaykhan Mirarkiizar brought concerns about the inability of performing a retaliatory strike if the Party leadership is eliminated during a surprise attack. President Hadii promised that measures to solve this problem are currently being prepared. The Party has decided to intensify the shelter construction efforts. At the planned rate, the entire population will have access to the bunkers in a matter of four years. After the people are secured, the factories will be outfitted with their unique measures to protect the industry from destruction. Even if their foes do the unthinkable, they will never defeat the Hadiist cause. The Party is preparing to safeguard the Tajara and their future in any possible way.

I think this is too restrictive. Having an open backstory allows for way more creativity.

This has a couple of issues I can think of right now: -Would need to add support for a job check for the merchant -There is no way to make sure that an away site spawns close to the station, if the merchant is far, it will be harder for them to interact with the crew

How was anyone in this situation being racist?

No. I did not change my mind. Appeal denied.

Liberation Army Development Department Reveals New Service Rifle As the enemies of Al'mariist prepare themselves to erase the great legacy of Al'marii, the Democratic People's Republic must not stay behind. In their quest to arm the guardians of the revolution, the Liberation Army Development Department has unveiled today a new weapon: the Mrrazhak Model-1 automatic rifle. Designed from traditional carbines and the Ho'taki Marksman Rifle, the Mrrazhak is a versatile gun with an impressive rate of fire. Unlike most automatic and semi-automatic rifles currently in service, it is entirely magazine fed. The Mrrazhak Model-1 most notable feature is its inexpensive, simple, and accessible design. Factories and workshops can easily retool their production lines to fabricate the rifle. Soldiers can quickly field strip the weapon; learning how to disassemble and reassemble the rifle takes less than ten minutes. Even during detrimental conditions - such as in snowstorms, when covered in mud, or under sub-zero temperatures - the Mrrazhak can function. Of all rifles created by the Tajara, the Mrrazhak is undoubtedly the most reliable so far. Liberation Army scientists claimed that even a child can put one together and operate it without adult supervision. The National Assembly received the invention with open arms. President Almrah Harrlala and Supreme Commander Nated agreed on putting the rifle in production as soon as possible. Ex-interim President Brajrr Alnadruskiy called the invention a "marvel of Tajaran ingenuity". Maksym Razin asked for the weapon blueprints to be distributed to all Rrhaza-Akhran, so they may being to manufacture their own weapons; Supreme Commander Nated authorized the distribution. Bakhteiarova Mirzakhani suggested selling the weapon to the civilian population as well; despite some protest from the Free Tajaran People's Party, the National Assembly voted in favor of allowing the population to acquire the Mrrazhak. Alexeii K'marr, in one of his rare public appearances, was present to show support for the motion. The industry of Shastar is currently responsible for supplying the Liberation Army with Mrrazhak rifles for now. The necessary technicians and blueprints have been already dispatched to all territories to guarantee the establishment of independent, decentralized manufacturing centers. The Liberation Army expects to army their soldiers in a matter of years with the new service rifle.

Retconned articles from the Adhomai Chronicle are here, alongside with why they were retconned: SECOND PAGE Cataclysmic Natural Disaster Devastates Region of Ras'nrr: Entire Air Brigade And Airbase Destroyed By Messa's Fury Date: August 2, 2018 Author: Guest Marlon Phoenix The weather weapon were retconned. The article was rewritten to preserve the plot. Hadii Summons Earthquake To Knock Entire Mountain Down: "Adhomai Itself Will Devour You" Date: December 3, 2018 Author: Guest Marlon Phoenix The weather weapon were retconned.

Retconned articles from the Adhomai Liberation Network are here, alongside with why they were retconned: FIRST PAGE PATRIOTS Seize Secrets of Super-matter From Xeno Imperialists: RON'TUL Will Be Avenged Ten-Fold Date: August 18, 2018 Author: Guest Marlon Phoenix The angle of the dpra making its own supermatter was never pursued and the article is meant to explain how they got power to make the weather weapon. Supreme Commander Nated Announces Bold New Weapon: Claims Responsibility For Spawning A Tornado Against Our Enemy Date: September 10, 2018 Author: Guest Marlon Phoenix The weather weapon were retconned. The article was rewritten to preserve the plot that allowed Das'nrra to be taken by the ALA.

Clashes in the Borderlands; Constabulary Under Attack 24.04.2464 In a parliament meeting today, the Royal Constabulary has reported multiple attacks against its forces in the Borderlands last night. Bandits, armed with small arms and explosives, raided outposts and armories in the region. Radio stations were also sabotaged before the assault. Without proper communication, the constables were unable to mount an effective defense. The criminals retreated into the wilderness as soon as the radio system was brought back. A total of forty-seven agents were killed in action and at least three hundred were wounded. Thousand more guns and ammunition crates were stolen. Due to its high level of coordination, authorities believe that the Adhomai Democratic Front was likely behind the incident. Royal Peacekeepers investigators on site confirmed that the weapons and bombs used matched the ones stolen from a train shipment two months ago. Grand Admiral Mahtra Dynhaas, enraged by the news, demanded the immediate deployment of the military to the Borderlands. Grand Duke Akym Yudenikh argued against the use of the army, he claimed that any armed buildup in the frontier would only antagonize the Liberation Army. Prince Serhiy Oliinyk suggested trying to contact the movement to solve the issue through diplomacy. Count Tscherim Sanguszkho proposed evacuating the entire population of the region, breaking up the families, and resettling them across the Kingdom to dismantle the Front. Once again, Her Majesty refused to deploy the army to solve issues related to internal securities. Grand Duke Akym Yudenikh proposed hiring private forces to reinforce the Constabulary in the Borderlands. He explained that the Stellar Corporate Conglomerate had recently established the Private Military Contracting Group, a corporation focused on offering security services. In his suggestion, the megacorporation would deploy their agents alongside regular policing units. The proposal was met with much opposition from the other parties. The Officers Party was convinced when the Grand Duke sealed a deal with Misizla Steel Works to supply the military with large quantities of steel at low prices for a classified project. The Njarir'Akhran Renewal Fraternity accepted the mottion after a brief meeting between Grand Duke Akym Yudenikh and Count Tscherim Sanguszkho; it is unknown what exactly they decided. Her Majesty agreed to the Grand Duke's project and contacted the Private Military Contracting Group. The corporation accepted the proposal and promised to deliver some of its forces next month. Prince Serhiy Oliinyk called this development "a dangerous move considering what they know of the typical mercenary behavior in Adhomai".

We accepted someone else, but thanks for applying. If you want to incorporate what you wrote in the lore, you are free to make an application in the forums. You are also invited to apply again when a slot opens or when I retire.

We accepted someone else, but thanks for applying. If you want to incorporate what you wrote in the lore, you are free to make an application in the forums. You are also invited to apply again when a slot opens or when I retire.

After taking in consideration this application and consulting with the team, I have decided to accept this application.. Welcome to the team.

Liberation Army Navy is Given its First Assignment Supreme Commander Nated and President Almrah Harrlala have reached a consensus regarding the Liberation Army Navy's first assignment: the establishment and maintenance of an advanced outpost on the North Pole. While the mission was considered unorthodox by many, Supreme Commander Nated explained that the treacherous polar waters will provide excellent training for the ship crews. President Harrlala revealed that the city of Crevus is also being involved; they will work on recovering lost ALA ships and valuable resources in the region. The assignment proved to be controversial in the National Assembly. Ex-interim President Brajrr Alnadruskiy called it a waste of resources. Maksym Razin agreed with it; he called Supreme Commander Nated's idea genial. Bakhteiarova Mirzakhani expressed concerns about moving any wreckage since they were commonly inhabited by underwater fauna. Rahman Hadjuk requested again the deployment of the navy to Amohda, insisting that this was the only way they could stop the insurrection. Ahem Kah'nrir asked for the Liberation Army to search for Al'mari in the North Pole. Mazula Azaula, the current mayor of Crevus, was consulted and fully approved the proposal. Due to the structure of the Liberation Army, the proposal was accepted by Supreme Commander Nated despite the opposition. Tul’baq J’shar, an important figure in the Crevan maritime sector, was present at the meeting to negotiate the city's participation in the deal. Alongside the military, civilian ships will take part in the assignment to the pole north. These workers will be tasked with scavenging and maintaining the ALA presence in the region. Kandaza J’shar was chosen to be the city's representative. Usta Gorsh'kovy, a Second Revolution veteran who recently returned to service, was selected by Supreme Commander Nated to lead the expedition. The expedition is set to depart in one month.

Out of the three main Tajaran factions (PRA, DPRA, and NKA) which one is your favorite and why? Once, the Tajara lore was focused on a big conflict between the three factions, the second civil war, which was pretty much on what the lore focused on and was built upon. With time, we moved from this with in-character developments to the current on going situation, the cold war. Now, lets say that you are tasked with moving foward narrative from the cold war into another big thing for the species, what would you do?

The post claims that the nuke is an easy way to win now, but no one can activate it without adminbus. So it is kinda making things up.

Out of the three main Tajaran factions (PRA, DPRA, and NKA) which one is your favorite and why? Once, the Tajara lore was focused on a big conflict between the three factions, the second civil war, which was pretty much on what the lore focused on and was built upon. With time, we moved from this with in-character developments to the current on going situation, the cold war. Now, lets say that you are tasked with moving foward narrative from the cold war into another big thing for the species, what would you do?

Out of the three main Tajaran factions (PRA, DPRA, and NKA) which one is your favorite and why? Once, the Tajara lore was focused on a big conflict between the three factions, the second civil war, which was pretty much on what the lore focused on and was built upon. With time, we moved from this with in-character developments to the current on going situation, the cold war. Now, lets say that you are tasked with moving foward narrative from the cold war into another big thing for the species, what would you do?

President Hadii Announces the End of the Draft of 58 17.04.2464 In a speech, transmitted through radio and television, President Hadii announced the end of the draft introduced in 2458. Originally, the measure was implemented following the massacre of prisoners of war in Tampiska. The law required all male Tajara between 18-30 years old to report to army recruiters. NanoTrasen workers were exempt from serving. During the war, the draft successfully solved the army's manpower shortages. Millions of Tajara joined the military and defended the Republic against its enemies. With the end of the draft, the army returns to its previous volunteer model. Currently conscripted soldiers will serve until the end of their assignment. After President Hadii's broadcast, Minister of Defense Irbaykhan Mirarkiizar revealed a series of reforms to make the military career more attractive to the younger generations. The salaries and pensions received a substantial raise. The families of serving Tajara are now given preference in public health and housing waiting lists. All soldiers involved in the Hro'zamal campaign will be given a plot of land in the colony after the planet is pacified. Minister Mirarkiizar also disclosed that Avahs are being added to the field rations. At the request of the Ministry of Defense, Secretary Hura'zhi Mira'zkui delivered a report on the current situation of the navy. Outside of the submarine divisions, most captains report a pervasive manpower issue; modern ships remain in the port due to the lack of crew. Unlike the army, the navy never recovered from the previous conflict. Secretary Mira'zkui concluded that the Republic must invest in the navy as soon as possible. He added that in case of another conflict, Harr'masir can only be recovered through naval operations. President Hadii tasked Minister Mirarkiizar and Secretary Mira'zkui with organizing a complete reform of the ship's accommodations and recruitment campaigns. Crew's quarters are to be refurbished to offer the best comfort the Republic can provide to its brave sailors. Party Secretary Yakiv Hadii has been assigned to the project to coordinate the necessary industrial efforts.

Mercenaries can't use that nuke

Where? In aurora? I think this is taking a step back. These were removed from pretty much everywhere since they were not popular with anyone in the team. Why are these examples needed? I also think you have a big issue you should work on before considering joining any team: you are quick to accuse people to bad intentions out of character due to things they have done in character. This also applies to lore. I have seen you a couple of times claim that writers were insensive just because they wrote something negative that was somehow close to something that happened irl. The biggest example was complaining about the Mars' violet dawn because it was similar to a tornado you experienced. I think this is really a big thing that would cause a lot of conflict between someone who has a lot of administrative power over the team and the writers.

Application accepted.

Sorry for the delay. The horizon release got me very busy and I wanted to wait until you could answer to the questions. The biggest issues I have with this application is the backstory and how it lacks any tangible Tajaran element. Sure that the character is living in Little Adhomai, but the political situation, besides the poverty, has zero effect on her as character. We don't know what S’ajii believes, where her family is from, or what are her allegiances. I recommend that you make a character that was born and raised in Adhomai for your next application. Application denied.