Jump to content

Alberyk

Lore Writers
  • Posts

    3,120
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by Alberyk

  1. Cloning has to go, be reworked or changed something that fits brainmed. Brainmed makes death takes far more time. People can take a lot more of damage before starting to die. Killing someone takes far more effort.
  2. As other players already covered the questions that I had, I will accept this application.
  3. A lot of those notes are warning, temporary bans and the perma bans, you can clearly see those, and most of the times, people won't place notes without talking to you. The reason why your application was denied is because from your shitory, it seems that you do not learn or you are trying to improve.
  4. Not sure what this complaint is, if it is about your unban being rejected or if it is about your original ban. But, I will be sincere here, you have a lot of notes, warning, bans and around two permabans. There is zero reason to trust that you will behave after all those chances. I don't really see what is wrong with the mod's choice of keeping you banned.
  5. After taking in consideratio those changes and the discussion we had, I will accept this application.
  6. I have a couple of issues with your application: -the character is meant to be from the dpra, but they have some of pra beliefs in it. Such as being irreligious; which is not something that popular in the dpra. -if she is old enough to join the university and got her diploma, she was old enough to witness the fighting in the region, the pra was present in Shastar's region until around last year. So, I do not really think that it would make much sense for her sheltered to be for the war or its effects. This is something that is only reserved to pra citizens that would be living in the most central and well defended cities. -I am also having a bit of trouble trying to undertstand her parents' reasons to allow her to leave. If they are guerrilla fighters they would support the ALA/DPRA vision, which is for the Tajara people to fight for their own place and future on galaxy without alien interference. However, you said they do not really believe that Adhomai has any future, which is kinda confusing. Also, while the DPRA is not really friendly towards corporation, it would be possible for their citizens to leave and work with NT, but that also gets in the way of her parents' ethos here. Anyway, before I can move on with this application. I would like you address those points, and if you want, you can change/rewrite stuff in your character backstory section.
  7. King Holds Royal Triump to Honor the Peace 05.12.2461 Under the orders of the King a Royal Triumph was held in Kaltir this morning, honoring the armistice and sacrifices of our brave Tajara. A Royal Triumph is a ceremony, originated during the Gunpowder age, to celebrate a military victory. The processing was lead by Field-Marshal Rrhazhal Zarkradar'Akhan, standing on the top of an armored car, accompanied by Crown Heir Shumaila Azunja, Rustam Harmaliik and Mrraka'te'almalik Marrmeladov. Companies of soldiers, royal grenadiers, imperial dragons, expeditionary marines and sailors marched after them. Amohdan and Nomad auxiliary forces also took part in the Triumph. Captured tanks, artillery pieces and other weapons were displayed through the streets. Ship’s guns fired proudly on port, mixing their distant explosion with the music played by the accompanying band. Starting at the gates of the old city, the parade made their way towards the Imperial Palace courtyard. King Azunja, alongside parliamentarians, priests and other nobles, awaited for them before the open gates of the building. Field-Marshal Rrhazhal and Crown-Heir Shumaila were awarded the Order of the Victorious Sun, the highest distinction in the New Kingdom, for their success and leadership during the war. The King addressed the nation in a short speech: King Azunja retired to his accommodations shortly after this discourse, citing indisposition as the reason to do not join further celebrations. The city’s population, alongside with the visiting military, continued to celebrate the peace. Pubs, theaters and clubs remained open for the rest of the day and night, bursting with activity.
  8. The pr does not add a new gun, it replaces the existing sprite. Besides, that was done with the intention of removing the obvious 20-21th century guns. That is why the pr is a step back.
  9. The bolt action rifles should not be changed. I added the sprites they have right now to match the tajaran aesthetic, replacing them with a generic 20th century gun is going back on whatever progress we made to make things unique.
  10. Tajara People Celebrates the Victory Against Tyrants After the glorious victory of our warriors against tyrants, such as the usurper of Al’mari’s legacy and his alien allies, the population of the Democratic People’s Republic commemorates the peace. Several cities are organizing celebrations and parades to praise the efforts of the Adhomai Liberation Army and our leaders in securing the future of the Tajaran people. Crevus is lighten up by countless gondolas occupying its canals and hotels hosting parties to celebrate the armistice. Tajara inhabitants, tourists and the few human residents in the city celebrate together. Mayor Mazula Azaula has invited the remaining members of the S'rand'marr Coalition to spend their last days on Adhomai in Crevus, spending their credits on casinos and other attractions. Amohdan swordsmen and soldiers take part in military parades all across the island, exhibiting their weapons and performing displays of martial prowess. Members of the Amohdan Free Lodge exalt the courage of their Tajara, claiming that this peace would be impossible without their sacrifices. While Amohda still remains under a military junta, we wish them a safe transition to a democratic government in the near future. The population gathered before the Das'nrra Imperial Palace In Shastar City, the location where peace was reached, to hear the speech of President Almrah Harrlala. She appeared on the balcony of the building, holding a copy of the Armistice and accompanied by Former Commander Nated, before addressing the nation; Harrlala’s words were transmitted through all Adhomai via radio. Promises to accelerate the democratization process in junta controlled areas, and the dismantling of possible rogue guerrillas cells were also made during celebrations in the capital.
  11. Peace is Celebrated Through Nal'tor 03.11.2461 A large military parade was held in Nal’tor this morning to celebrate the recent peace. Despite the destruction caused by royalist ships, most of the rubble has already been removed from the streets with reconstruction efforts being on the way. The procession was lead by the Young Patriotic Girl's Commune Nal'Tor Chapter and other youth organizations. Several army brigades followed next, wearing their uniforms and accompanied by Party Commissars. Remnants of the Republic Guard marched alongside the Ha’narr corps, with a proud display of Tesla Troopers wearing their advanced hardsuits after them. Armored divisions and Kosmostrelki crews also paraded. The parade began at the Great War Memorial and proceeded past the People's Congress before ending at the Steeple’s ruins. On the front of the remains, a stage was built to host the presidential speech, that would be transmitted to all republican homes through television and radio. President Hadii, accompanied by his ministries, Headmaster Harrrdanim and generals, climbed the platform and stood before the crowd that had gathered to hear his glorious message. Several minutes of applause followed before the President’s speech; President Hadii’s speech was interrupted by a vigorous display of ovation by the crowd. After the acclamation subdued, he continued: Cheering and applause continued from the end of the speech until President Hadii left the stage. Famous singer Yasmin Piaf and the presidential band played patriotic pieces shortly after. Celebrations came to an end with an announcement from government officials about plans for the construction of the “Palace of the Free Tajara” in place of the destroyed Steeple, that once served as the seat of government. When completed, this building will be the tallest freestanding structure in Adhomai.
  12. Security is pretty much the only department that has a lot of alternate uniforms for whatever reason. We should not really perpetue this.
  13. No. Security has enough snowflake alternate uniforms. Voting for dismissal.
  14. Voting for dismissal because I don't really think that a charge for this particular case is needed.
  15. Voting for dismissal because the machine can print yields now.
  16. Moving to archive in the light of recent access changes.
  17. They were removed, so moving this to the bin.
  18. After taking in consideration that this suggestion has enough support, I suggest the following rule:
  19. Okay, I will unban you. But, if you break the rules, you are probably going to be banned again and this time it will be for good. Appeal accepted.
  20. Hi, I had a look around and I have decided that all that happened was pretty much fine in character and had proper motivations. It was not like he went to kill off people for no reason or was going stuff while there was a monster eating the crew. I will close this appeal in around one day or so.
  21. There is around a 30 days period before prs are reverted, unless exceptional circumstances. Besides, this topic is still open for feedback:
  22. +1 dismissal. Stopping people from entering the game just because they did not add flavor text is not really a good idea; people can just be trying out a job or a character before investing more into them, or they are just new. Besides, this would just promote people adding whatever stuff to just get past the check. Neither I think we should add a system for automatic flavor text, I would prefer if flavor text was more optional like records are.
  23. This is your second perma. You were already given a chance after the first one, why should we do it? Because even after you were unbanned, you managed to collect a couple of notes and warnings before your were banned again.
  24. Peace in Adhomai: Tajaran Nations Signs Armistice Following a ceasefire and two days of negotiations between the warring factions of Adhomai, an official armistice has been signed by the People’s Republic of Adhomai, Democratic People’s Republic of Adhomai and the New Kingdom of Adhomai. While gathered in the Das'rra Imperial Palace, under the supervision of the S'rand'marr Coalition and the Jargon Federation, Adhomian diplomats and government officials decided the terms that allowed the cessation of hostiles. The second Tajaran civil war lasted for one decade, resulting in immeasurable loss of life, destruction of cities and heritage sites, and the political destabilization of the region. Millions of Tajara have fled the conflict; most sought refuge in the Republic of Tau Ceti, where they have been accepted as an integral part of the Biesellite community. NanoTrasen has also offered work and shelter for many hard working tajara through the years. The Armistice of Shastar, named after the capital of the DPRA, included terms related to territorial changes, population transfer, galactic recognition and citizenship status. The principal articles includes; The Tajaran community on Tau Ceti has received the news of armistice with celebration, with many citing reunion with their families and visiting Adhomai as a possibility. NanoTrasen representatives affirmed interest in future economic cooperation with the Democratic People’s Republic and New Kingdom. Adhomai political map after the Armistice of Shastar.
  25. Appeal accepted.
×
×
  • Create New...