Hello! I will have to ask the same question Zundy asked, are you serious about this? This is incredibly bare minimum for whitelist application. I'd suggest looking through some of the past dionae applications or asking questions on the dionae section of the lorehub discord, here: https://discord.gg/Sa48FBY
Your back story shows none of their personality, only a very, very bear minimum of where they came from. This greatly needs to be expanded/reworked.
I'll leave this open for a few days if you wish to edit it here, or I can deny this application and let you write another.