JamOfBoy

Hi! Lore writer for the vaurca species here. I'll be reviewing your application. Very detailed backstory. Well made character, clearly showing good demonstration of the lore. I do have some issues, such as the part where you listed FreshRefreshments#2173 in your "what makes roleplaying this species different to a human" which I have my reservations about, but this is a matter of subjectivity. In the future I'd advise you consider other aspects such as their strong sense of smell - this sort of thing gives the wrong impression With that said, application accepted! I look forward to seeing you on station.

Yikes, this has been up for a long while. Sorry for not getting around to this. I'll be denying your application.

Hello! I'm sorry for taking a while in getting to this. Application accepted. I look forward to seeing you play Sikt on station.

very cool and good, more antags is better, for one can not become robust without practical experience if you desire a gamemode, surely it isn't that much of a stretch to participate in the round as that mode's antag however, I foresee potential issues with people not wanting to be antags, and thus not voting, resulting in a lower amount of votes in general. this could also potentially bait newer players if not fully elaborated. perhaps in the voting menu, some big ol' text saying "voting = you could be the antag" would be nice albeit it is not necessary by any means but in summary yes very good i like this idea

You can't do CPR on vaurca unless you remove their mask. So, if you really wanted to do CPR on a vaurca, you'd actually just be making things worse! But if we want to mechanically enforce this, sure. Not being able to be choked also sounds cool - but that's for another suggestion. Please don't mouth-to-mouth insect men who breathe a toxic, highly combustible super-fuel and also oxygen while you have a lit cigarette, thanks.

Hello. I am a trained assassin when it comes to vaurca names. You made the horrendous error... of putting an apostrophe between the vaurca name and hive name. Ka'Akaix'Sirii'C'thur. This is incorrect, it should just be a space. Anyway, contracted killing aside, this app is very well done, and you answered the questions provided excellently. On top of feedback, I see no reason to deny it, so... Application accepted.

Hello. Sorry to keep you waiting. Application accepted.

I have an issue when it comes to people using bound as their whitelist application characters. Unbound can reach much, much deeper levels of character nuance and detail, to the point where I'd personally consider applying with a bound akin to the act of shooting yourself in the foot. Regardless, this is done in an eloquent enough manner and I've kept you waiting. I also share the two above opinions regarding your characters, and roleplay. Application accepted. Also, join the vaurca discord. If you want...

my legs hurt a lot but thanks

Hello, sorry this took so long. The application is good - just remember, there is no apostrophe between Ka'Akaix'Name and the hive. In this case, it'd be Ka'Akaix'Zoor C'thur. With that said, application accepted.

Hello. Sorry to keep you waiting. I don't see any reason to deny this, so. Application accepted. I look forward to seeing you play Xor.

Once again, you apply with a seven foot tall warrior from Zoleth who works in security. Coupled with the reports of your previous behaviour, it is difficult for me to think that you'll use this whitelist well. All I have to go off of is your word. But, very well. I'll take your word for it. Just please don't give me a reason to remove the whitelist. Application accepted.

Application denied. Lack of feedback paired with reports on your behaviour. If I can't see improvement, I can't just assume you've improved. Aside from this, applying with a warrior, in security, from a warrior brood - doesn't lend you any favours in this regard. You're free to reapply after three days.

No. No higher than 8 feet, and even that's a stretch. This is listed on the wiki. Please also list an RGB value for the character's body color. I will approve or deny this application after a few days. Please get feedback in the meantime. You can advertise the application in OOC once per round, with a link, as well as in the discord.

Sorry for the late reply! In summary: Wow this is really good. Like, really good. There's 'application accepted' level, and then there's 'application should've been accepted a while ago'. I could go into detail but there are a lot of really good points about this application in general. And I might be lazy. So with that said, Application accepted.

Hello. You show very good demonstration of the lore, and, well, Cnaym summed it up pretty well. Application accepted - but we'll be watching you, chief...

who are you again?

Hello. While you show a good understanding of lore at this point, I also judge applications based on roleplay of existing characters. In this department, you suffer, as is reported and witnessed by me and others. So, for this reason, application denied. Vaurca are one of the harder races to roleplay as. Demonstrate you are capable. You may reapply after three days, but take more time to refine your ability.

For most other brood's I'd expect a warrior to be a paramedic or EMT. Xakt's brood is a curious exception to this and you've incorporated this extremely well into the application. This alone is worthy of merit, but the rest of the application is superb. Seriously. With that being said, I see no reason to keep you waiting. Application accepted.

Lots of good feedback and we discussed the app in DMs. Good demonstration of knowledge and I'm sure you'll ask and fill in the gaps yourself. Application accepted.

Your answers are superb, and while you have some gaps in knowledge, this is fine. You remind me a lot of myself when I first applied for vaurca deputy. So, Application accepted.

Hello. You display decent knowledge on the lore. However, nothing here really persuades me that you will use this application well: The fact your whitelist application character is a warrior. The fact your whitelist application is a TCFL volunteer. The fact you thought vaurca did not have the ability to feel pain. All of these are big red flags when it comes to you. Big enough to warrant me denying this application. Application denied. You are free to reapply after 3 days.