Alberyk

After talking with the applicant, we decided to deny this application this application for now. If you have any questions or concerns, you can contact me in the discord (Alberyk#7868).

Making a suggestion without giving any idea is pointless. Neither all megacorporations have a focus on augmentation.

There are some issues with this application: -The backstory is only one paragraph. -There is essentially zero Tajara lore in the backstory. We do not know where she comes from, what events in Tajaran history affected her life, what she believes, or what job or megacorporation she is going to work for. This backstory could probably be from anyone anywhere in the universe and it would still work. You need to incorporate the lore in the character backstory. There is no way I can judge if you know it enough. There is no mention of any of the recent major happenings or one of the factions. I will have to deny this application, you can reapply in one week.

There is lore for that already. They are meant to be rewards to good employees. We also don't need every security officer with free binoculars.

Trial accepted.

We have this already, it is called chemicals. Besides, most antags have some kind of healing.

The conclusion I can reach here is that you deserved the ban and you are staying banned.

National Assembly Continues the Infrastructure Effort: the Nation to be Connected Through the Extranet Inspired by the success of the early construction efforts of the Republic, President Almrah Harrlala has presented to the National Assembly another plan to modernize the nation. The Digitial Telecommunications Project aims to construct further infrastructure to expand the Extranet coverage across the country. Towers, communication hubs, and cables will be installed in the territory under the civilian administration. The project has the objective of connecting the population and the government agencies through the Extranet. Current governmental physical archives are also being digitalized to facilitate access and storage of information. To bring the Extranet into the Al'mariist homes, the Shastar Technical University has revealed its newest personal computer model: the Az'Mar-63. Developed and manufactured solely with national technology, the Az'mar-63 is an inexpensive and reliable machine. The computer runs the first DPRA-made operational system: ALMN/OS. The Digitial Telecommunications Project includes incentives for the production and distribution of the Az'Mar-63 with popular prices. While well-received by most of the National Assembly. The Adhomian Blue Party opposed the project, claiming that rare-earth mining needed for the construction of the infrastructure and manufacturing of the computers damages the environment. This concern was addressed by President Harrlala with a promise of expanding the national reserves in the future. Junta representatives complained that the initiative did not include any of their current territories. President Almrah explained the exception with a brief declaration to the Assembly: Despite the complaints lodged by some Liberation Army elements, the project was approved by the National Assembly. The infrastructure work and distribution of the terminals starts this month.

This application as some issues: Tajarans is not a thing. The plural is just Tajara. The backstory is a single paragraph, when the application says it should be at least two. The backstory is really barren and we can't really know anything about the character besides the fact that he idolized his grandfather and later gave up on the nka after serving in the army. R'odion's reason to just give up on the NKA are kinda strange. It is not really explained, despite a minor injury that would not even stop him from doing his job, why he just gave up on the Royalist cause. What the character is doing on Tau Ceti or what he plans outside of just living there are not explored in any manner. We don't even know what job he will be on the station. I will have to deny this application for now, but you are free to reapply in one week. Please rewrite the backstory to fix the issues I pointed out.

You had the chance to post a serious reply and try to have a conversation, instead you posted this: If you show no interest in the complaint, you can't expect people to give you the chance to start talking out of nowhere after you told you don't care/they are whinning/just pm me. Besides, from what I am what I am seeing, the complaint was open for a while after prate posted on it.

I am still a bit unsure what you mean by this complaint, but you managed to get a fair share of notes, warnings, bans, and a perma in around one month after being unbanned. Not giving you another chance when you just decided to don't take a complaint serious after all of what happened is not unreasonable.

Kaltir Bunkers' Strike Leaders are Sentenced! 16.07.2463 Since the Kaltir Bunker's Strike breakup, the nation waited with bated breath for the conclusion of the judgment of the worker's leadership. Protests asking for the release of the prisoners were held in all major cities; these manifestations remained largely peaceful. The Parliament's sessions were also majorly concerned with how to deal with the situation and the future of the Bunker Plan. The Commoners Party attempted to pass laws to pardon the ringleaders and ease strike regulation requirements. Queen Shumaila Azunja blocked any kind of proposal that sought to interfere in the oncoming trial. The trial was held in Kaltir's Criminal Court Centre. Magistrate Lev Alekseev was selected to preside over the case. Honorable Lev Alekseev, a middle-aged Hharar who graduated from the Kaltir Law Academy, is known for his harsh sentences. The court was full of reporters, students, and researchers wanting to witness what some tabloids called the "Trial of the Decade''. While the defendants were unable to hire an attorney because of their financial situation, they were provided by members of the Commoners Party with a lawyer. After eight hours of discussion and evidence analysis, the magistrate delivered his verdict: Agramakova Hanar, a 33 years old Hharar crane operator, was sentenced to 41 years in prison for organizing an unlawful strike, conspiring to murder a law agent, and incitement to violence. Agramakova was born in a family of Amohdan migrants now living in Bar'jar. She was found to be responsible for recruiting the strikes and took part in organizing the armed resistance against the intervention. Despite being accused of having connections to the Al'mariist secret service by the prosecutor, she was absolved of this accusation because of a witness that testified that Hanar took part in the Royalist resistance in Amohda during the war. Suren Mikoyan, a 41 years old Zhan-Khasan flooring installer, was sentenced to life imprisonment for organizing an unlawful strike, murder of a law agent, and incitement to violence. Mikoyan was born in a family of peasants living in the outskirts of Olska. He became a construction worker after his farm was razed by the Hadiist forces during their occupation of the southern territories. Outside of being one of the main organizers of the strike, Mikoyan took part in the fighting and delivered a killing blow with a sledgehammer against an officer. The prosecutor was unable to find any evidence of his involvement with Hadiist or Al'mariist elements. Anastas Ryuitin, a 19 years old Zhan-Khasan brick mason, was sentenced to death for organizing an unlawful strike, conspiring to murder a law agent, incitement to violence, insulting the monarch, and for cooperating with hostile governments. Anastas was born in Kaltir, but spent most of his childhood in Tau Ceti; his family moved to the alien system at the dawn of the war. Ryuitin's household returned to Adhomai with the end of the hostilities. Unable to acquire any kind of higher education, Anastas became a construction worker. The prosecutor pointed out that he already had a history of insubordination in his short career; he had been disciplined at least three times before the strike for refusing to follow orders. Ryuitin was the first one to come up with the idea of an unauthorized strike, he also took an active role in making demands. A brief investigation of his past uncovered that he took part in a street gang affiliated with the People's Republic members. Honorable Lev Alekseev concluded that Anastas was a Hadiist element attempting to undermine the Bunker Construction. The crowd present before Kaltir's Criminal Court Centre was deeply divided between those who believed that the sentences were unfair and those who were glad that the Hadiist spy was found. The Royal Party celebrated the verdict. The Officers Party demanded the death sentence for the rest of the defendants. The Commoners Party asked for Queen Azunja to concede a pardon to the ringleaders. Her Majesty decided against interfering in the sentence. Protests asking for the release of the prisoners continue. The defense attorney has promised to appeal the judge's decision. Anastas Ryuitin will be executed by a firing squad in five months.

Trial accepted.

Trial accepted.

Taking this into consideration, why did you apply for unathi lore deputy? And why did you withdraw that application?

Partisan Initiative to Safeguard the People Against Hostile Occupation! 08.07.2463 When the rebels occupied the Republic's rightful territory in the last war, the population was left defenseless. Headmaster Harrrdanim Tyr'adrr has envisioned the Partisan Initiative to prevent this from ever happening again: a plan to train civilian volunteers, named Zbrojny, in guerilla tactics to act behind enemy lines. Initiation into the program is be voluntary at first; participation can be made mandatory by President Hadii in case of imminent danger to the nation. To take part in the Initiative, citizens must contact their local Party representative to fill an application and pass a background check. The Zbrojny Initiative includes a six-month training period overseen by the People's Strategic Intelligence Service. The volunteers will learn how to handle weapons, prepare explosives, sabotage communication devices, and conduct successful guerilla warfare. The Partisans will be issued Adar'Mazy pistols and submachine guns as their main weaponry. Each Zbrojny will be part of a local squad that answers to the PSIS district supervising their area. The identity of every volunteer is being stored by the agency in encrypted files to avoid any kind of preemptive attack by invading forces. Mandatory ideological classes will also be part of the tuition. In case of an invasion, orders issued by the Party will be transmitted to the cells behind enemy lines by agents specialized in infiltration. The Zbrojny squads are to engage in sabotage and hit-and-run attacks to wither away the occupying forces. Every citizen will become a fighter in the struggle to bring Adhomai together. A Tajara with a gun behind every door and tree - the rebels and monarchists will never hurt the brave Hadiist people again. Headmaster Tyr'adrr confirmed that several training centers are already operational; thousands of Zbrojny can now be trained. President Hadii signed orders to supply the People's Strategic Intelligence Service with extra weapons and equipment to help expand the program. Anyone who joins the Partisan Initiative is exempt from military service and has priority in the national health care system.

@firstact I am closing this complaint in one week. This has been open for more than one month and you did not reply to it.

Trial failed after administrative action resulted from unbecoming behavior as a staff member.

I have nothing to ask here. The application displays a good knowledge of the lore and uses it well to create a character. Application accepted.

Kaltir Bunker Strike Comes to an End; Three Hundred Wounded and Eleven Dead 28.06.2463 Forces of the constabulary and the Royal Peacekeepers entered the Kaltir bunker construction site last night to forcefully end the strike. Acting under direct orders of the Crown, the law agents surrounded the camp and ordered for the workers to stand down. The strikers refused to comply; they asked that their demands be met instead. Raakti Shariim agents then fired tear gas grenades over the fences to disperse the gathering. As the agitators scrambled for protection, an armored car rammed through the construction site gate. The constable advanced against the protesters at the entrance, expelling them from the site and subjugating anyone that resisted with truncheons and electric batons. As the constable advanced further into the camp to liberate it, they found fierce resistance from the remaining strikers. The law agents were assaulted with tools and improvised weapons. The skirmishes resulted in the death of four officers and seven workers. Klyuchevksy Medical Center reports three hundred and fifty wounded from the confrontation. The worker's leadership surrendered two hours after the invasion. At least one hundred Tajara were arrested. The Royal Peacekeepers have already identified three main ringleaders; all of the chief instigators have been detained and will be prosecuted to the full extent of the law. The Commoners Party labeled the action brutal and unnecessary; they also pleaded for the Queen to pardon the protesters. The Officers and the Royal Party praised the actions of the Constabulary and the Royal Peacekeepers. Queen Shumaila Azunja issued an official statement on the events: The Commoners Party has called for protests against the Crown's actions. Work on the Kaltir bunker system is expected to resume in two days.

Application accepted.

Strike Paralyzes the Construction of Kaltir's Bunkers 25.06.2463 The progress on Kaltir's bunker system came to a halt this morning due to a strike against the working conditions. A large group of workers arrived early from their barracks and formed a picket line to block the gate leading to the construction site. Heavy machinery was displaced and tools were seized by Tajara engaging in the demonstration. Any Tajara attempting to return to work was coerced by the strikers to either join them or leave. The foremen and corporate specialists did not join the strike. The strikers are complaining about supposedly excessively long shifts, low pay, cold barracks, and foul-tasting NanoTrasen issued rations. They demand a raise in their salaries, proper payment of extra hours, and better living quarters. The strike leadership also accuses Dymtris Construction of not being prepared to deal with a project of his magnitude; they claimed that the firm was only commissioned because of nepotism within the Parliament. Dymtris Construction's administration refused to negotiate with the instigators; the company explained that the conditions are essentially the same as before and that the workers are taking advantage of the importance of the project to make unreasonable demands. A new group of workers was transferred to Kaltir to continue the construction; they were prevented from entering the building site by the protesters. The constabulary was then called to disperse the gathering; this attempt proved to be unsuccessful as the workers refused to return to their barracks despite the presence of the officers. The chief constable of Kaltir refrained from using force without explicit orders from the Crown. The protesters are currently disrespecting the Kingdom's strikers regulations; anyone planning a demonstration at their workplace can only do so after submitting a request to their local constabulary. The strike now continues without any kind of resolution on sight. The situation remains tense as the protesters camp at the construction site and the constables remain in the area to prevent any kind of violence. The Royal Party requested that the Crown takes action against the strike as soon as possible. The Officers Party called the strike a "hadiist infiltration attempt to undermine their society". The Commoners Party suggested a meeting with the worker's leadership to solve the impasse through diplomacy. Queen Shumaila Azunja urged the strikers to return to work.

On trial until 23th of the next month.

On trial until 23th of the next month.

Some questions: Your describe the character as religious, but I can't find any trace of that or what religion they follow in their backstory. Can you expand more on that? How did his service for the ALA ended in 2458? And how he was even given an opportunity to work for NanoTrasen? How does the character see the other two factions that he fought again?