I don't feel like your responses are satisfactory. To keep it short, I don't think this application is up to par, and I have to give it a -1.
The character you described is essentially formless; in fact, from most of your backstory, it seems like you intentionally skipped the most important part of basically every Tajara's backstory (the war, specifically), you wrote a backstory that intentionally skipped the things that would tie them into Adhomai (religion, family), one of which you intentionally didn't elaborate on on an application for the species you're playing, when you very well know that religion is a core-concept of ANY Tajaran character. I'm inclined to believe, based on your answers, that the character you submitted is only an excuse to play a PRA drone rather than an actual Tajara. The inclusion of the last part of your application regarding homosexuality is honestly bizzarre too. I honestly don't get why you included something like that but not religion?
You wrote a character that lost everything to the PRA and has no ties whatsoever to Adhomai beyond a single good (one could argue not even good, honestly, but the bare minimum) act by the government and this was enough to radicalize your character into leaving Adhomai and being an unparalleled shill for said government with absolutely no remorse? While it's true that hate radicalizes you have given some really, really poor reasons. In fact, those reasons I would say are still insufficient.
I'm also of the opinion that you should know as a lore developer that your writing should be explicit in an application. You're exposing the character you want to play and showing your understanding of the lore; how are you supposed to do this when you intentionally hide story important details?